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Section 6 Writing a survival story
题型解读
谋篇思路
写一篇有关灾害经历的记叙文。这类记叙文需要交代时间、地点、经过和教训等
首段:交代清楚事件的背景
主体段落:主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果
尾段:发表感想、愿望等
满分佳句
■ 夺人眼球开头句
1.This has been the worst in the past decade/ten years.
这是十年来最严重的一次。
2.It is reported that the heavy rainfall caused rivers to break their banks, washing away bridges.
据报道,大水冲垮了堤防和桥梁。
■ 亮点出彩篇中句
1.The rescue work is going on/is still under way.
救灾工作正在进行。
2.In the meantime, people nationwide are taking an active part in raising funds for disaster areas/people nationwide are actively donating money to disaster areas.
与此同时,全国人民都在积极为灾区捐款。
3.It was estimated that the economic losses were more than 9.7 billion yuan.
估计造成经济损失超过97亿元。
4.In spite of all this, the government called on the whole nation to support the places hit by the worst disaster.
除了所有的这些,政府还号召全国支援被这次大灾难袭击的地区。
5.Tens of thousands of people lost their precious lives owing to the strong earthquake.
由于强烈地震,成千上万的人失去了宝贵的生命。
6.Fortunately, international societies offered their helping hands shortly after the earthquake—donating clothes,food and medicine.
幸运的是,地震后不久,国际社会纷纷伸出援助之手——包括捐衣服、食品和药物。
■ 韵味无穷结尾句
1.Earth is our only home⁃planet. It is urgent for us to stop damaging it, and to do our best to protect it and make it a lovely place suitable to live in.
地球是我们唯一的家园星球。因此,当务之急就是停止破坏它,并尽力保护它,使它成为一个可爱的适合居住的地方。
2.We have nowhere to go and survive except where we are now.
除了我们现在生存的地方,我们已经无处可去。
3.In the past hundred years, there have been frequent natural disasters, such as floods, droughts, mud⁃rock flows, seismic sea waves, earthquakes, windstorms and the stretching of new deserts.
在过去的一百年里,自然灾害频繁发生,如洪水,干旱,泥石流,海啸,地震,风暴和新的沙漠的延伸。
4.The disasters have killed millions upon millions of people, destroyed countless homes, and wiped out numerous pieces of fertile land.
灾害已经使成千上万的人失去了生命,摧毁了无数的房屋,摧毁了许多块肥沃的土地。
5.Now more and more people become aware that those disasters have much to do with what we have done to Earth.
现在越来越多的人意识到这些灾害都与我们对地球所做的有关。
写作规范
假定你是李华,你市在前几天发生了一次严重的火灾,请你用英语向你