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Section 6 Writing a reflection
题型解读
谋篇思路
写一篇感想。名言语言精炼,含蓄典雅。把读过名言后获得的感受、体会以及受到的教育、启迪等写下来
首段:明确将要进行介绍的名言
主体段落:对名言的描述与理解
尾段:自己对名言的评价与自己读后的感受
满分佳句
■ 夺人眼球开头句
1.Of all the countless famous sayings I have ever heard, ... impressed me most.
在我听过的不计其数的名言中,……给我留下了最深刻的印象。
2.... which goes like this ...
……是这样说的……
■ 亮点出彩篇中句
1.What impressed me most is that ...
给我留下最深刻印象的是……
2.As is universally acknowledged, ...
众所周知,……
3.For one thing ..., for another ...
一方面……,另一方面……
4.I will take ... for example, who/which ...
我将以……为例,……
■ 韵味无穷结尾句
1.The more I am aware of the significance of the famous saying, the more benefits Ill get in my daily study and job.
我越是明白这句名言的意思,越是在日常工作和学习中受益。
2.I cant agree more with the view.
我深感赞同此观点。
写作规范
一次英语课上,老师要求每人就自己喜欢的一句名人名言或者谚语用英语谈谈自己的体会。假如你喜欢的是:Where there is a will, there is a way.请你根据以下要点写一篇短文,表达对这句话的理解。
要点:1.说出该名言的基本含义;2.举例谈谈自己的感想。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
第一步:认真审题 谋篇布局
体裁
人称
时态
要点结构图
首段
说明目的——将要介绍一句名言
应用文
第一人称
一般现在时
主体段落
名言的内容及个人对名言的理解
尾段
自己对名言的感悟或者名言对自己的影响
第二步:核心词汇 想周全
1.achieve ones goal 实现目标
2.contribute to success 有助于成功
3.universally acknowledged 广为人知
4.an iron person 一个意志坚定的人
5.fierce competition 激烈的竞争
6.benefit from 受益
第三步:由词及句 雏形现
1.在不计其数的名言中,我最喜欢的是“Where there is a will, there is a way.”。
Of all the countless famous sayings, my favorite is “Where there is a will, there is a way.”
2.不管有多难,意志坚定的人都可以实现目标。
However hard it might be, anyone who has a strong mind can achieve his goal.
3.意志坚定是成功的重要因素之一。
Having a strong will is one of the most important factors contributing to success.
4.越好地理解它,并应用于日常学习和生活中,我们就越能够从中更多地受益。
If we can understand it better, and apply it to our study and work, we will benefit more from it.
第四步:句式升级 造亮点
1.将句1和句2升级为含有定语从句和让步状语从句的复合句
Of all the countless famous sayings, my favorite is “Where there is a will, there is a way.”, which means that anyone who has a strong mind can achieve his goal, however hard it might be.
2.将句4升级为“the+比较级, the+比较级”的句子
The better we understan