内容正文:
读后续写遣词造句微专题
高三英语组 贾文桂
2023.10.15
书: 书写规范
面: 卷面整齐
表达: 流畅准确
Do you find anything in common?
倒进千行万动 装入千思万绪
用倒装
叙事件
说心声
【限时训练二范文改写】
Ignoring my mother’s reminder, I slid into the forbidden woods. Hardly had I entered the woods when I was attracted by the fascinating scenery. Among various colorful flowers danced butterflies. With excitement, I chased after the graceful creatures. However, so fast did they fly that I failed to catch up with them. Time flew before I knew it. Not until the sun went down, did I realize that I had no idea where I was. Try as I might to find my way out, all my efforts were in vain. Frightened and helpless, I burst out crying. Only then did I realize how meaningful Mom’s warning was! “Had I kept my mother’s warning in mind, I wouldn’t be in such a terrible situation,” I said to myself. All of a sudden, behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. So excited was I that I sprang to my feet and responded to my mom with a trembling voice, “Mom, never will I ignore your warning. ”
自探生疑
1. 赏析限时训练二范文改写
2. 归纳故事中“倒装句”结构,构建思维导图
Tips:
1. Summarize the inversions.
2. Add more inversions you have learned.
合探解疑
1. 小组讨论,完善思维导图
2. 展示组同学上台讨论,合作补充思维导图
展示要求:
1. 面向全体,声音洪亮
2. 时间控制在3分钟内
妙用倒装 步步为营
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Continuation Writing is not easy.
But each STEP counts.
Step by Step, you will create a better story.
迎面跑来的是一个着红衣的帅气小伙,手持火炬,眼中流露出自豪的神色。
__________________ was a handsome boy in red, torch in hand and eyes __________ ___________________.
Part 1:熟能生巧活动(一)
Running forward
twinkling/
glowing with pride
Part 1:熟能生巧活动(二)
1._________________(尽管尝试) Chen Yuxi might, she paled by ___________ (compare) with Quan hongchan.
2.______________________________________(她一入水) than the audience burst _____ cheers.
3.________________________________(观众如此激动) that they couldn’t contain their cheers.
4._____________________________(观众很少能够) enjoy such a wonderful game between top athletes.
Part 1:熟能生巧活动(二)
Try a