Module9写作精讲2023-2024学年外研版英语八年级上册

外研版八上Module 9 Population 写作主题：人口 一、话题分析 本模块的话题是“人口”，涉及环境污染、城市发展等内容。通过本模块的学习，学生能了解世界人口现状，谈论人口增长及其带来的噪声、污染、水资源短缺等问题以及由此而产生的后果，从而增强学生控制人口数量、保护环境的意识。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点： 1.能用“billion, million, thousand”等数词表达人口的数量； 2.能用“there be, it is clear that...”等句型表达人口增长及其带来的问题； 3.能用“we should/had better...”等句式对人口增长、环境保护等相关问题提出合理的建议。 文章精讲： 由于人口不断增长，环境污染越来越严重，环保话题已经成为社会热点。某英文杂志社正在就该话题举办征文活动，请你根据以下提示要点和要求写一篇80词左右的英语短文，给杂志社投稿。 提示要点： 1.水越来越脏； 2.塑料袋（plastic bags)随处可见； 3.树木被砍伐（cut down); 4.针对以上三个问题提出合理化建议。 要求： 1.句子结构准确，信息内容完整，语句通顺，语意连贯，可适当发挥； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 开头引入话题： 1. Now there are more and more people, and the environment pollution is becoming worse and worse. 2.With the increase of population, the environment pollution is becoming more serious(越来越严重）． 3.With the development of technology and increase of population(随着科技的进步和人口的增长），people have led a more comfortable life(已经过上了更加舒适的生活）。However, it has brought more pollution to the world. 水越来越脏： 1. Firstly, the water is becoming dirtier and dirtier. 2. First of all, people have thrown rubbish into the water. So, the water is dirtier and dirtier. 3. First of all, the water is turning black and smelly(恶臭的）as people pour rubbish into the river. 塑料袋随处可见： 1. Secondly, we can see plastic bags everywhere. 2. Besides, plastic bags are everywhere because people don't throw them into the dust bins. 3. Besides, plastic bags can be found/seen everywhere，which polluted the environment badly. 树木被砍伐： 1. Thirdly, trees are cut down(被砍倒）by people for the development of cities. 2.Moreover, to develop the cities, people cut down trees without caring about its influences(影响）． 3. Moreover, trees are cut without caring about the influences on the next generation(对下一代的影响）． 合理化建议： 引入： 1. To have a better life, we should do something to protect the environment. 2.However,it is everyone's duty(职责）to do something to protect the environment. 3. However, we should take some measures (采取一些措施）to protect the environment , or(否则）we will suffer (遭受）in the future. 针对每一个