读后续写系列(四) 人与自然之帮助小动物 讲义-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写系列（四） 人与自然之帮助小动物 1、 思路 1. 帮助前：动物遇到困难(What? Why?) 2. 帮助时：帮动物解决困难(How? Feeling?) 3. 帮助后：动物的感激(How?)，人的反应/感悟(feeling?)，结尾升华(人与动物和谐共处） 二．动作类素材积累： 舔：lick 嗅：smell/sniff 吠叫：bark 摇尾巴：wag the tail 把耳朵竖起来：put the ear up 咬住衣角：bite the corner of the coat 抚摸它的羽毛： stroke its feathers 躺在地上 \ 围着我跑：lie on the ground \ run around me 抖动全身：shake the whole body 三．好句积累 ● 人救大型动物 ①人的努力: 1. I focused on.../ I spared no effort to ... /I struggle to.../I try my best to... 2. He focused on comforting Poppy, bent down to give it a big hug, and then stroked its back gently. 他弯下腰给波比（狗）一个拥抱，然后轻抚它。 ②努力的失败：An hour later, we still weren’t making much progress. 一个小时之后，我们还没有取得很大的进步。 ③动物的可怜：And the more she struggled to get free, the more stuck she became. 她越挣扎着获得自由，她卡得越多。 ④最终的外力援助：They joined in and worked super-hard. Everyone was working on all four of the camel’s legs at the same time, using different techniques. 他们参与进来并且非常努力工作。与此同时，每个人使用不同的技巧医治骆驼的四条腿。 ⑤动物获救及感激： 1.We were relieved that the baby monkey got rescued with our joint efforts. Afterwards, it wagged its tail as if to express its gratitude to us. 在我们共同努力下，小猴子获救了，真是令人欣慰。它摇着尾巴，好像在向我们表示感谢。 2.Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand it seems like saying thank you. What a warm scene! 似乎已经好多了，狼慢慢抬起头，给Becky的手一个吻，好像在表达感谢，多温暖！ 3.Then, it swam toward us again. Using its head, it touched our hands, seemingly saying that we were to be thanked. 然后，它再次游向我们用他的头触碰我们的手，好像在说我们值得感谢。 ● 人救小型动物 ①人的努力: I focused on.../ I spared no effort to ... /I struggle to.../I try my best to... ②动物的开心：The poor creature flapped its wings happily, quacking its way in the lake. 这个可怜的物种开心地拍打着它的翅膀，在湖中嘎嘎叫回家。 ③动物的感激： It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. 看起来这只鸟在等我，圆圆的眼睛盯着我好像在传达一些深切的，无言的感激。 ④我的反应：I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature. 一看到这个有声音的并且感激的物种，我感到松了一口气和敬畏。