内容正文:
假如你是李华,目前在英国一所学校做交换生,想找一个室友来分担租房费用,现在社区论坛上刊登一则招租启示。内容包括:
1. 情况介绍;
2. 对室友的要求。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Roommate Wanted
分析:
写信之前先介绍一下自己的情况,如
study at London University next month
an exchange student
rent a house near the university at a reasonable price
read the advertisement on the Internet
be interested in your house posted online
表明写信目的:
I’m looking for a roommate to share the rent during my stay in the UK.
I'd like to look for a roommate to share the rent of my house in UK.
具体招租内容:
1.how much is the rent for a whole year
2.Is there any necessary furniture and equipment in your house?
3.Is it convenient for me to get to my university in your neighborhood?
注意:
告知租金的价格the price of the rent
注意名词是否可数:furniture/equipment/information均为不可数名词;
适当增加细节如对室友的希望和要求
I’m a friendly and easy-going boy who’d like to keep my room neat and tidy, so it’ll be great if my roommate has a lot in common with me.
自己的邮箱地址或其他联系方式
官方范文,
A Roommate Wanted
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m looking for a roommate to share the rent during my stay in the UK.
Located near the campus, the well-furnished flat is equipped with modern appliances. There are two separate bedrooms and bathrooms, including a shared kitchen and a balcony, which can guarantee your privacy and convenience.
I’m a friendly and easy-going boy who’d like to keep my room neat and tidy, so it’ll be great if my roommate has a lot in common with me. If interested, you can reach me at LiHua@gmail.com.
参考范文一,
A roommate wanted
I’m an exchange student from China and I’m looking for a roommate to share the rent.
I live in a small apartment with 2 rooms near the campus within a fifteen minutes’ walk. The apartment is well equipped with lights, gas, lifts and modern household facilities, which is also the reason why I can’t afford it independently and thus look for a roommate to share this super convenient and comfortable apartment. Here are the requirements for the roommate. First, he needs to be clean and d