内容正文:
1、 长难句翻译
1. In today’s world, winners are celebrated and treated as heroes, but if doping and gene-therapy continue to affect the outcomes of major sporting events, the word “hero” will have lost all meaning.
2. Depending on which role you choose, you could help to increase a community’s access to safe drinking water, or help to protect valuable local cultures.
2、 长难句翻译解析
1. In today’s world, winners are celebrated and treated as heroes, but if doping and gene-therapy continue to affect the outcomes of major sporting events, the word “hero” will have lost all meaning.
A.内容解析:
①句式分析
本句是由并列连词but连接的复合句,第二个分句运用了将来完成时,同时,包含有一个if引导的条件状语从句。
②词语点拨
1) celebrate vt. 庆祝
The whole city celebrated the New Year with fireworks.
全城放焰火来庆祝新年。
2) affect vt.影响,感动
I told him firmly that his opinion will not affect my decision.
我坚定的告诉他,他的观点不会影响我的决定。
The audience present was deeply affected by his speech.
在场的听众都被他的演讲深深地打动了。
③语法点拨
将来完成时的构成:will/shall have done,表示“到将来某一时间为止已经完成的动作”。常与by + 将来时间,before+将来时间和by the time 引导的表示将来时间的从句连用。如:
Hewill have finished writing his novel by the end of next year.
到明年年底他就会写完他的小说了。
When we get there,she’ll have gone to work.
我们到那里时她会已上班去了。
B.句式翻译
在当今世界,人们祝贺获胜者,并把他们看作英雄,但如果服用兴奋剂和基因治疗继续影响着主要体育项目的成绩的话,“英雄”就失去了它的全部意义。
2. Depending on which role you choose, you could help to increase a community’s access to safe drinking water, or help to protect valuable local cultures.
①内容分析
今天的句子又是一个在写作里可以借鉴的句式结构。我们先来用标记一下句子里面的基本组成部分:
Depending on which role you choose,
you could help to increase a community’s access to safe drinking water,
or help to protect valuable local cultures.
在这个不算长的句子里,既涉及核心词汇的准确表述,又有非谓语动词和从句的语言多样化,还有清晰的句子内部层次逻辑,在高考写作中,这种句子就是非常体现你的语言水平的,也是阅卷者非常青睐的。
我们一部分一部分来看。
1、Depending on which role you choose,
根据你选择哪一个角色
“depending on 根据“在这里是个状语,作用等同于更常见的“according to 根据”。需要注意的是,depending和according说到底是一个非谓语动词的形式,是一个短语,所以在它的后面是绝对不能直接加句子写谓语的。我在过往回答过很多类似的问题,学生把according to当作连词看待,这是绝对错误的。
depending on / according to + sb/sth
如果你需要加从句,也要像原句一样,加入从句关系词然后再引导从句。这个就是在介