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环境描写微技能 以人教版必修二第四单元Reading for Writing为框架 What joke? Lead-in: scenic spots in Jiangxi Lead-in: scenic spots in Jiangxi Lead-in: scenic spots in Jiangxi Our government will issue an English brochure to promote Lushan, calling on everyone to contribute. Lead-in: a brochure waiting for you to complete Review Review: analyse the descriptive paragraph. What words does the writer use to describe sensory details? 庐山 (Lushan) Describe Lushan from senses A. relaxed B. satisfied C. sad D. shocked Touch: mountain road Walking along the mountain road, feel the sun and _ on your skin, and you will definitely be _. breeze AB Add emotion to the description of the environment. 10 In Flower Path, breathe in the sweet scent of peach blossom, and you will certainly be peaceful. Smell: Flower Path(花径) Describe the place from smell and add emotion. 桃花 (peach blossom) 11 Sight: the observation deck(观景台) What can you see in the picture? Mountains, people, trees... 12 A. mountains rise and fall one after another. B. the green trees grow thickly all around. C. there are rolling hills dotted with people. D. trees are like being in the green ocean. Sight: the observation deck(观景台) From the observation deck, you can see _ AB 13 Hearing: Sandiequan Waterfall(三叠泉瀑布) What did you hear? Birds, waterflow. 14 Hearing: Sandiequan Waterfall(三叠泉瀑布) Find out the related description of Ireland and imitate the sentence to describe the place from hearing. Down by Sandiequan Waterfall, the sound of waterflow and cries of birds make up the music of the mountain. 15 Located in Jiujiang, Lushan is a mountain whose scenery excites and inspires all, offering something for the senses... CHECKLIST Emotion Is there right emotion behind your descriptions? Senses Does it cover sensory details correctly? Transitions Is the language easy to follow Write a brochure to promote Lushan Conclusion When describing a place, you can start with the five senses. You can add emotion to the description of the environment. 1. Poli