内容正文:
如何用英语写建议信
【写作任务】
假定你是某国际学校学生李华,请你用英语给校长Mr Hill写一封邮件,建议学校创办机器人社团(Robotics Club)。
注意:词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr Hill,
I am Li Hua, a student of our school. ______________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求给校长写一封建议信,属于应用文。建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告,并说明理由,以便让对方接受自己的想法或主张。建议信要给出写信的原因、建议的内容和提出建议的理由。语气要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
二、谋篇布局
信件的开头和结尾已经给出,我们只需要写出正文部分即可。正文可以分为三部分:
第一部分:表明写作意图(建议学校创办机器人社团);
第二部分:阐述理由(学习相关知识,提高解决问题的能力和团队协作能力,丰富课余生活);
第三部分:表达希望(希望校长考虑成立该社团)。
三、常用表达
★表明写作意图:
I strongly suggest that ...
Here are a few suggestions about ...
I’m writing to make a suggestion that ...
I am writing to express my views concerning (关于) ...
It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions / advice on ...
Considering ..., I would like to make some suggestions.
★阐述理由:
Firstly / First / First of all ... Secondly / Second ... Lastly / Last but not least ...
It is a good idea to ...
There will be a great opportunity for ... to ...
Sth.we will learn through sth. will be helpful for the rest of our life.
provide ... with a chance to gain knowledge of ...
improve problem-solving and teamwork skills
make one’s school life more colorful / enrich (使丰富) one’s school life
★表达希望:
I really hope you will take my advice / suggestions into consideration.
I hope my suggestions will work well with you.
I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful / helpful ...
I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice / suggestions.
【范文展示】
Possible version 1:
Dear Mr Hill,
I am Li Hua, a student of our school. I am writing to make a suggestion