内容正文:
Unit 1 China and the world
单元话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1.爱迪生在发明电灯泡的时候,失败了八千多次,但是他没有放弃。很多朋友嘲笑他,但是他认为他能从这些失败当中找到改进的办法。终于,在一次一次的尝试之后,爱迪生成功地发明了电灯泡。请你以“Failure Is the Mother of Success”为题目写一篇短文。
提示内容:1. 讲述爱迪生发明电灯泡的过程;
2. 结合自己的学习和生活实际,谈谈受到的启发。
写作要求:1. 字迹工整,语言准确,内容完整连贯,适当使用复合句;
2. 80词以上,已给出词汇不计入总词数。
参考词汇:爱迪生Edison 灯泡bulb
Failure Is the Mother of Success
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【答案】例文
Failure Is the Mother of Success
I’d like to tell you a story. Before Edison invented bulbs, he failed over and over again, up to more than eight thousand times. But he didn’t give up trying. At the same time, all his friends laughed at what he did. However, he thought he could find ways to improve from these failures. Finally, he succeeded in inventing the first bulb in the world.
In my opinion, we should all learn from Edison. We may meet lots of difficulties in our life, but just like the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success.” If we keep on working and never give up, we will surely succeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:写作内容提示已给出,考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息,并且在写作过程中要注意适当使用复合句。
[写作步骤]
第一步,讲述爱迪生发明电灯泡的过程;
第二步,结合学习和生活实际,讲述自己受到的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① over and over again反复地
② give up doing sth.放弃做某事
③ laugh at嘲笑
④ succeed in doing sth.成功做某事
[高分句型]
① At the same time, all his friends laughed at what he did.(what引导的宾语从句)
② However, he thought he could find ways to improve from these failures.(省略了that的宾语从句)
③ If we keep on working and never give up, we will surely succee