2024届高考英语一轮复习读后续写细节描写讲义

高考读后续写细节描写 一、 动作描写 1.动作描写的3个原则 (1)要准确:表现一个动作可以利用许多动词,但应恰当利用最准确的动词,刻画对应的动作。 (2)有过程:展示人物个性的动作时,应通过细节描写展示出动作的过程,在续写时,应按动作的先后 顺序叙述整个过程。 (3)用修饰:在描写动作时,可利用各种状语,说明时间、地点原因、伴随等情况,使动作描写更丰富。 2.动作描写常用的高分素材 （1） 动作描写短语: struggle out of the bed 挣扎着起床 kneel down 跪下 slip into/steal into溜进 quicken one's pace加快脚步 slip out of.. 从...溜走 stagger to one's feet 摇摇晃晃地站起来 rush into冲进 hobble down the stairs 一瘸一拐地走下台阶 drag one's legs拖着双腿 jump to one's feet 跳起来 stamp one's feet跺脚 stand on tiptoe 踮着脚尖站着 put one's feet up把脚拾起来 tiptoe to the bedside蹑手蹑脚地走到床边 get down on one's knees 跪下双膝 spring to one's feet 突然站起来 drag oneself through费力地穿过 walk on the street aimlessly漫无目的地在大街上走着 stand p站起身 walk gracefully步态优美地走 walk through the pouring rain 在倾盆大雨中走 give a murmur of approval 低声表示赞同 say deliberately故意地说 wander into the woods漫步到树林里 make one's first appearance首次露面 cast a hasty glance at sb.朝某人匆匆瞥了一眼 cast an admiring glance at sb.向某人投以钦佩的目光 gaze up at the stars凝望着天上的星星 look at sb.with a fixed gaze凝视着某人 throw a curious glance at sth./sb.好奇地向某物/某人看了一眼 hear the thunder rolling in the distance 听到远处隆隆的雷声 praise sb. (up) to the skies根力称赞/大肆吹捧某人 never hear anything against sb.从未听说过反对某人的话 recognize sb. at first hearing -听到声者就知道是某人 break into shouts of applause爆发出阵阵喝彩声 listen impatiently 不耐心地听 pace back and forth来回踱步 stroll about/around/through the town在城里闲逛 walk across a street 步行穿过马路 walk arm in arm 臂挽着臂走 (2)与肢体语言相关的动作描写好句 ① head She turned and headed for the door. 她转身朝门走去。 He buried/put/held his head in hands, greatly annoyed. 他双手抱头,非常生气。 Many people in the audience nodded in agreement. 许多观众点头表示赞同。 I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow 头一碰枕头我就睡着了。 He hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame. 他羞傀地低下了头。 ②face Her face paled with fright. 她吓得脸都的。 A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crossed his face 他的睑上露出了灿烂的笑容。 Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present 我给她礼物时,她的脸上焕发出了光彩。 ③cheek Color rushed/flooded/rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched. 意识到有人在看她时