Unit 4 Section 9 Writing—Write a funny story-【赢在微点】轻松课堂2023-2024学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第二册（北师大版）

Section 9　Writing—Write a funny story 题型解读 谋篇思路 故事类文章属于记叙文文体,注意把握记叙文的六个要素,即时间(when),地点(where),人物(who),事件(what),原因(why)和过程(how)。记住这六个要素,写故事性记叙文就成功了一半 首段:交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物 主体段落:事件的原因及具体发展过程 尾段:写明最终结果,并点明文章主题 满分佳句 　 ■ 夺人眼球开头句 1.Around the end of the first century AD, a Roman writer wrote about a terrible volcanic eruption that he had witnessed as a young man. 大约公元1世纪末,一位罗马作家描述了他年轻时目睹的一次可怕的火山爆发的情景。 2.Mr Black was knocked over by a motorcycle when crossing the street. 布莱克先生在过马路的时候被一辆摩托车撞倒。 ■ 亮点出彩篇中句 1.When young, he once thought of dropping out of school because the whole family lived on his mother􀆳s small income. 当他年轻的时候,由于全家仅靠母亲的微薄收入生活,他曾经想到过辍学。 2.It never occurred to me that you could succeed in persuading him to change his mind. 我从没想到你能成功说服他改变主意。 3.Now it occurred to him that his farm had much potential. 现在他突然想起他的农场很有潜力。 4.I have never seen the feelings of being oppressed bursting forth like a fire. 我从来没有看见过那像火一样突然迸发出来的被压抑的情感。 5.At the sad news, he abandoned himself to despair. 听到这悲伤的消息,他陷入了绝望之中。 ■ 韵味无穷结尾句 1.This particularly sad event left a deep impression on Pliny. 这场灾难给普利尼留下深刻的印象。 2.In this way, the city, which the world had once forgotten, lives on nearly 2,000 years after its loss. 以这种方式,在消失近2 000年后,这座曾经一度被世界遗忘的城市又复活了。 写作规范 　　根据以下提示,以第一人称描述一次买鞋的经历。 一天,我在一家鞋店买了一双皮鞋,店员告诉我这双鞋实行“三包”。四天后这双鞋坏了,我很生气,回到鞋店想要回我的钱。但店员不想赔钱,他说,“三包”就是保留三天。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 第一步:认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁 人称 时态 要点结构图 首段 交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物 记叙文 第一人称 一般过去时 主体段落 写事件的原因及发展过程 尾段 写结果,同时在结尾处要尽量自然地点明文章主题 第二步:核心词汇　想周全 1.be worn out 穿坏;用旧  2.get back 取回;要回  3.make sb upset 使某人烦恼   4.keep one􀆳s promise 遵守诺言  5.three guarantees 三包  6.merely four days 仅仅四天   第三步:由词及句　雏形现 1.一天,我在一家鞋店买了一双皮鞋。 One day, I bought a pair of leather shoes in a shoe shop.  2.那里的卖家告诉我,店里的鞋子实行“三包”。 The seller there told me he would have “three guarantees” for the shoes.  3.我很高兴买了鞋并离开了商店。 I was delighted to buy the shoes and left the shop.  4.仅仅过了四天,鞋子就穿破了。 Merely four days later, the shoes were worn out.  5.我很生气,回