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记叙文---写人
PART ONE
Narrative---People
背景/基本信息引入
作出评价
第一段
第二段
第三段
写人为主的记叙文
个人事迹
写作步骤
范文分析
邓亚萍是很多人心目中的英雄,她的许多经历已经成为大家耳熟能详的励志故事。请你根据以下要点,写一篇介绍她的英语作文。
姓名:邓亚萍;
年龄:44岁;
籍贯:河南;
职业:乒乓球运动员;
经历:4岁开始打乒乓球,8岁获得业余体校全国冠军;
成就:11届亚运会冠军;41届世界乒乓球锦标赛冠军;在第25届奥运会中获得了两枚金牌,并在1998年成为国家集训队员;
现状:退役后,下海经商。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Deng Yaping,44, from Henan Province, is a talented woman player table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the 11th Asian Games and the 41st World Table Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic games she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of her short figure? Her hard work and determination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages.(基本信息)
At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis under the guidance of her father. When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. After retirement, she began to go into business.(个人事迹)
On her way to success, she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.(评价)
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写作精华
PART ONE
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1 ...was born in a poor family.
·····出生在一个贫穷的家庭。
2 He is always ready to help those in trouble.
他总是乐于助人。
3 She has set a good example for us.
她给我们树立了一个榜样。
4 Some were doing... some were doing... while others were doing...
有些人在做······,有些人在做······,而其他人在做·····
高分策略之句式
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5 The old man thanked her again and again.
这个老人一次又一次地感谢她。
6 Li Hua, who is a famous young writer, was born in...
李华,一位著名的年轻作家,出生于···..
7 He is not very strong but healthy and full of energy.
他不是很强壮,但是健康,充满活力。
8 My grandfather is in his seventies now. He is a kind and warm-hearted old man.
我姥爷现在70多岁了,他是一位和蔼、热心的老人。
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