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第2讲 写作提分的3大策略
策略一 要点内容补充——增加细节的4大技法
高考应用文写作的题目,除了简短的文字说明外,要求覆盖所有内容要点,也就是考生一定不能只简单的翻译或者仅仅完成所给信息提纲的内容。写作时可适当增加具体细节内容以使内容充实,行文连贯。
通过列举具体的实例来补充说明
1.such as .../like ...
要点:其次,带一个小礼物是个好主意。
Second, it is a good idea to bring a small gift, such as a bunch of flowers or a box of chocolate if they have young children.
2.for example/instance
要点:如今,我们中的一些人在校园里已经养成了一些坏习惯。
Nowadays, some of us have formed some bad habits on campus. For instance, some students leave the lights on in the daytime; some leave much food on the table after eating.
3....as well as...
要点:这项活动一定会帮助我们反思高中三年的学校生活。
The activity will surely help us reflect on the three years' senior high school life as well as look forward to a better journey in the future.
增加状语成分
1.增加目的状语——用in order to/ so that等
要点:我们学校今天在表演中心举行了一场音乐会。
In order to enrich the life of teachers and students as well as welcome the coming of Spring Festival, our school held a concert in the performance center today.
要点:想试一试的请速报名。
Whoever wants to have a try, please sign up quickly so that you don't miss the chance of being the winner.
2.增加结果状语——用so...that 等
要点:我得花很多时间做家庭作业。
I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.
要点:将安排一系列与环保相关的讲座。
A series of lectures related to environmental protection will be arranged, thus arousing people's awareness of living a lowcarbon life.
3.增加原因状语——用because等
要点:我从小就梦想当一名老师。
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child,because I think teaching is a sacred profession.
4.增加方式状语——用by doing等
要点:但是,我们许多人都忽略了良好生活习惯的重要性。
However, many of us ignore the importance of good living habits by eating junk food and staying up late.
5.增加动词ing形式作状语
要点:更重要的是,欢迎你们每个人都参与进来。
What's more, every one of you will be welcome to participate in it,enjoying movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
要点:我想和你分享毕业典礼活动细节。
Knowing you're interested in our coming graduation activity,I would like to share the details of the graduation event with you.
6.增加with复