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策略二 词汇升级——亮化词汇的3原则 对应学生P93
根据高考应用文写作的评分标准,应用词汇的丰富性和准确性是作文能否取得高分的一条重要的标准。所以,在词汇的亮化上应遵循以下三个原则:
词义具体化
所谓词义具体化原则,是指写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、笼统的表达,而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。
So good do they look that I think you could be interested in them.
→So attractive and alive do they look that I think you could be interested in them.
高级词汇优先
为了表现自己的语言功底,吸引阅卷老师的眼球,尽量用高年级阶段学到的高级词汇代替低年级阶段学到的词汇。
Eventually,I want to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.
→Eventually, I am strongly eager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
短语优先
用短语代替不仅会使文章增加亮点,而且如果关键时刻思维短路,用短语凑词数也是一个很好的选择。
1.形容词变短语的方法:of+同根名词
Furthermore, guzheng is very significant to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic world of music.
→Furthermore, guzheng is of great significance to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic world of music.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
2.动词变短语的方法:同义短语替换
know/realize→be aware of
help sb.→give sb. a hand/do sb. a favour
use→make (good/full) use of/take advantage of understand→figure out/make sense of
If anyone helps you, you should express your sincere gratitude to him or her.
→If anyone gives you a hand, you should express your sincere gratitude to him or her.
用高级词汇替换加黑词语
1.Surrounded by green trees,the farm is at the foot of the hill near our school.
→Surrounded by green trees,the farm is located at the foot of the hill near our school.(2020·全国Ⅱ卷满分作文)
2.Aimed to help us to know the importance of working,an activity themed “Working is the most beautiful” was held last week.
→Aimed to help us to be aware of the importance of working,an activity themed “Working is the most beautiful” was held last week.(北京卷满分作文)
3.I would really appreciate it if you could consider my application.
→I would really appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration .(全国Ⅰ卷满分作文)
4.Remember that you should avoid getting hurt during the training and keep a balanced diet.
→ Keep in mind that you should avoid getting hur