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高考读后续写微技能
动作描写
Continuation Writing
Skills for the description of actions
Actions of body parts | Action chains | Sentence patterns
by 向莎
we are going to focus on continuation writing today. in cw,You have a chance to write your own story.
it has a double meaning. after writing the last one in examination room, you move forward into the next stage of life,
Learning aims
了解读后续写中动作描写的技巧。
学习动作分解方法并掌握动作链的几种句型。
运用所学技巧和句型,回归高考读后续写。
“两法六句”
Lead in
两种构思方法:
四到一行:
看、听、想、说、做
线索呼应:
找到线索,前后呼应
六种高分句型:
分词短语作状语
非限制性定语从句
强调句
with复合结构
副词开头
倒装句
Lead in
Q: What kind of actions are included in this short clip(片段)?
(女王视角):看到唐三藏如此俊俏的脸庞,一时间竟顾不得听他在说什么,心里只想着这世上怎会有如此之美男,美得本女王话都说不出来了!也罢,再多欣赏(行为-做)他几眼吧……
we are going to focus on continuation writing today. in cw,You have a chance to write your own story.
it has a double meaning. after writing the last one in examination room, you move forward into the next stage of life,
The Revision of Verbs
最常见的6大动作:说、看、哭、笑、走、跑
“说”(say)
whisper
shout/scream
ask/enquire/inquire
answer/reply/respond
gasp
stammer
add/continue
小声说
大喊大叫
问
答
气喘吁吁地说
结结巴巴地说
继续说/补充道
eg. (11月期中联考续写范文)
"Where is Katy?" he said. Tom seemed to have had no thought but of his own escape. He said, "Katy is in the house!"
answered
asked
Skills for the description of actions
动作描写技巧
eg. Olive went into the room, took his bag, and went out again.
grabbed
dashed
rushed
Skill 1. general verbs concrete verbs
通用词汇 具体词汇
Hearing the news, .
Hearing the news, .
his jaw dropped
Skill 2. abstract words specific words
抽象词汇 有明确意义的词
he was shocked
eg. (11月期中联考续写范文)
"Where is Katy?" he asked. Tom seemed to have had no thought but of his own escape.
Skill 3. single verbs verbs with modifiers
单个动词 带修饰词的动词
anxiously/in/with anxiety
adv/prep短语
Appreciate more examples and analyse which skills they use.
Remembering that it was Friday, he woke up with a start, jumped out of bed, gr