内容正文:
倡议书
[基本框架]
倡议书一般包括三段:
第一段:点明发起倡议的背景和目的;
第二段:列举倡议的具体内容和要求;
第三段:发出呼吁。
[常用词块]
1.in order to do sth./for the purpose of为了……
2.should/be supposed to/ought to do sth.应该做某事
3.form the/a habit of...养成……的习惯
4.require sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
5.be beneficial to/be of (great) benefit to/do good to对……有益
6.be helpful to/be of great help to对……有所帮助
7.try/do one's best 尽某人最大的努力
8.devote oneself to致力于; 献身于
9.take action/measures/steps采取行动/措施
10.call on/appeal to sb. to do sth.号召/呼吁某人做某事
端午节将至。请你以校学生会的名义写一份倡议书,内容包括:
1.中国传统节日的重要意义;
2.你校打算怎样过端午节。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[学生习作]
Dear schoolmates,
Traditional Chinese festivals are of great importance and they should be well celebrated and maintained.That's because they can teach us about our nation's history as well as give us opportunities to learn about fine Chinese values.Besides,they are also sources of national pride.
Therefore, on the day of the coming Dragon Boat Festival,an activity of making and eating zongzi at the school has been designed for us students.The festival is best known for its dragon boat races.Schools,especially those in Southern China where there are many rivers and lakes should organize students to take part in or just watch the races.
In a word,it's everyone's duty to celebrate traditional Chinese festivals and give up the foreign ones. I hope everybody will be actively involved in the action.
The Students' Union
点评:
1.文章中运用了很多中高级词汇,如of great importance, maintain, as well as, opportunity, be designed for等;
2.文中有些句式还有升格空间:如开头的并列句可改为复合句。
[升格作文]
Dear schoolmates,
Traditional Chinese festivals,which are of great importance,should be well celebrated an