内容正文:
Continuation Writing
“遇险类”读后续写
解 题 套 路
读后续写中会遇到火灾,水灾,森林迷路,野生动物等内容的故事,如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节,我们就把这种类型的文章归为“遇险”型。
在往年高考真题中,就曾经考过四次:
2016年:夫妻吵架,森林迷路。
2017年:骑车旅行,中途遇狼。
2018年:农场度假,骑马迷路。
2020年:拍照北极熊遇险。
“遇险类”读后续写解题套路:
1. 总的原则:最终一定脱险。
2. 三个鲜明的阶段:
第一阶段:遭遇险境;
第二阶段:出现转机;
第三阶段:脱离危险。
第一阶段:遭遇险境
遭遇危险时,一定要描写环境和人物情绪。
第一阶段:遭遇险境
1. Immediately, an absolute darkness ______(rule笼罩) the forest, where strange and terrible sounds of different insects ___________(hear).
ruled
were heard
环境描写:
第一阶段:遭遇险境
2. __________________(怒不可遏), the bear roared and tried to tear down the fence with all his might.
With greater rage
环境描写:
第一阶段:遭遇险境
3. An unexpected shower added to the __________(difficult) of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain.
difficulty
环境描写:
frightened; panicked; scared; speechless; in panic; be full of fear; be filled with terror(恐惧) ; be rooted to the spot(僵在原地,呆若木鸡); one's knees feel weak; a wave of anxiety; flash across; sweep over;
害怕,紧张等情绪描写:
第一阶段:遭遇险境
第一阶段:遭遇险境
1. _______________________(恐惧和后悔的泪水) filled my eyes/welled up in my eyes.
Tears of fear and regret
情绪描写:
第一阶段:遭遇险境
2. __________________ (我感到不寒而栗) while the sounds were getting closer.
My blood ran cold
情绪描写:
第一阶段:遭遇险境
was rooted to the spot
3. Badly frightened by the sudden incident, she ___________________ 受到突发事件的惊吓,她定在原地动弹不得。
情绪描写:
第一阶段:遭遇险境
4. The thought __________________
_______________________ sent shivers down my spine.
情绪描写:
想到我们可能要在这样的黑暗中迷失,我不禁全身打起了冷颤。
that we might have
got lost in such darkness
第一阶段:遭遇险境
5. I could hear nothing but the sound of our hearts ________(beat) violently in our chests.
beating
情绪描写:
第二阶段:出现转机
句型积累:
1. ________________________________ _____________, we heard a faint voice in the distance.
就在我们绝望的那一刻,我们听到了远处微弱的声音。
Just as we were at the point of
desperation
第二阶段:出现转机
句型积累:
2. Fortunately, ___________________ ______ that the river could lead us to the camp.
幸运地是,我突然有了一个想法!那就是河流可以将我们引回营地。
it suddenly occurred
to me
句型积