读后续写动作描写中英文讲义-2024届高三英语一轮复习

四、续写高级表达 4.1 动作描写 动作描写要生动形象，有画面感，可用副词或介词短语修饰和分解动词构建动作链。 4.1.1 表动作先后高级句型 结构一：谓语A, B and C 1. 跳入湖里嬉戏 = 冲向湖边 + 脱掉衣服 + 跳入水中 孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进了水里。 The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water. 2. 抱住儿子 = 冲向前 + 蹲下 + 一把抱住 她向前冲过去，跪下来，把儿子抱在怀里。 She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms. 3. 歌手唱歌 = 扫视观众 + 深吸一口气 + 开始演唱 歌手瞥了眼观众，深吸了一口气，开始唱歌。 The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing. 4. 上车 = 拦车 + 上车 + 目的地 他拦了辆车，跳进车中，告诉司机“去警察局”。 He stopped the taxi, jumped into it and told the driver, “Go to the police station, please.” 结构二：“A having done, B”（主动）/“A-ed, B”（被动） 1. 排了三个小时的队，他被告知票售完了。 Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out. 2. 孩子们被故事打动了，开始哭了起来。 Deeply moved by the story, the children began to cry. 4.1.2 表动作同步高级句型 结构一：“A-ing, B”/“A, B-ing”/“A, B-ing and C-ing”/“A-ing, B, C-ing” 1. 看到狼躺在地上，他们马上意识到发生了什么。 Seeing the wolf lying on the ground, they instantly realized what had happened. 2. 她站在哪里，冻的瑟瑟发抖。 She stood there, shivering/trembling with cold. 3. 这个老人坐在日落下，读着报纸，听着广播。 The old man sat under the sunset, reading the newspaper and listening to the radio. 4. Mike轻抚我的头发，看着我的眼睛，低声说：“你是我见过的最漂亮的女孩”。 Looking straight into my eyes, Mike stroke my hair, whispering, “You are the most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen.” 5. 他怒火中烧，用他令人害怕的眼睛怒视着我，大喊道：“你真是个笨蛋”。 Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling, “You’re such an idiot.” 结构二：with复合结构/独立主格 1. Jenny缓慢地走到前面，双腿颤抖，心跳加速。 Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart beating fast. 2. 他转过身去，泪如泉涌。 He turned around, with tears rolling/streaming down his cheeks. 3. 这个女孩站在那儿，面带灰尘。 The girl stood there, with dirt on her face. 结构三：“A while B” 1. 双胞胎清理炉子上溢出的粥，同时他们的父亲正在烤面包。 The twins cle