读后续写矛盾冲突中的主题分析 讲义 2024届高考英语一轮复习

01情感冲突 情感冲突是指一个人内心或在人际关系中经历的情感上的矛盾或对立。这种冲突可能涉及到不同的情感状态、需求或价值观之间的不一致，导致个体感到困扰、焦虑或不安。在文学作品以及日常生活中，情感冲突常常是故事情节的核心，因为它们为角色提供了动机、发展和成长的机会。 情感冲突的解决通常需要个体在自己的内心进行反思，可能伴随着个人成长和对自己情感需求的更好理解。在文学和艺术中，情感冲突也是刻画复杂而真实人物的关键因素，使读者更容易产生共鸣和理解角色的行为动机。 在高考读后续写中，情感冲突主要体现在“情感纠结”类叙事性文本中。 例如，2022年全国新高考I卷读后续写题的阅读文本讲述了这样一个事件：患有脑疾而不能正常行走的David想参加越野赛跑比赛，但教练却暗示他如果参赛可能会被其他学生嘲笑，最后在“我”的鼓励下，他不再纠结，勇敢参赛。最初，David对是否参赛产生了心理矛盾，出现了情感上的挣扎。续写时，应将主题定为“赞扬David永不言败拒绝放弃的品质”。可通过如下主题句来升华主题： He approaches challenges with an unshakeable determination that commands respect.他以不可动摇的决心迎接挑战，赢得了尊重。 His tireless efforts and refusal to give up demonstrate his exceptional grit and determination.他不知疲倦地努力和拒绝放弃表明了他非凡的勇气和决心。 He faces difficulties head-on with an unyielding strength that commands admiration.他以不屈的力量直面困难，令人钦佩。 His never-say-die attitude exemplifies the true meaning of resilience and determination.他永不言败的态度体现了坚韧和决心的真正含义。 高分范文： We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. Seeing his face filled with anxiety, I felt sad, deciding to talk something with him. Turning to David, I smiled, “David, Look, what a wonderful event!” “Yeah!” David smiled weakly, bowing his head. Patting on his shoulder, I said in a soft voice, “I heard you had worked so hard for this event. How I admire your strong determination. Why not give it a try?” “Teacher, I am afraid kids from other schools will laugh at me. I think what the coach said is right.” murmured David, with glum looks on his face. “But David, what counts most is to participate to the best of your ability in whatever we’re doing. Do you agree?” After a temporary hesitation, David nodded in agreement, finally deciding to join in the cross-country team.   I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. With a blast of the gun, David tried his best to shoot from the start line, but he failed. Painful and a bit embarrassed as he was, he still dragged his feet to keep moving forward. The sun was beating down, the hot weather suffocating. A