内容正文:
初识读后续写
Contiuation Writing
2023年全国新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写
2023年全国新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写
原文材料350 词以内,要求续写的文章150-200 词左右
续写两个自然段,每段开头语已经给出;
所给原文阅读材料以富有情节的记叙文为主,话题贴近生活,内容为问题解决.
读后续写的3个特点:
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Task1 Please order those pictures
A
B
C
D
E
F
E B F D A C
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Task2 If you are asked to divide these pictures into 2 parts, what will you do with them?
Note that one part is for reading and the other part is for writing in the continuation writing
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How to divide these pictures into 2 parts?
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How to drink?
Turning point 转折点
Reading
(part 1 from ___ to ___)
aims to find the problem
Writing
(part 2 from ___ to ___)
aims to solve the problem
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深度解读语篇
Read
浅层信息获取: 5W1H
深层文本解读
理清情节和情感
分析人物性格特点
明确故事主题
品味写作风格和语言
Think
结合所给两段首句
原文呼应+正能量结局
生动编写故事
动作描写
情感描写
环境描写
语言运用
推测情节发展
构思写作框架
Write
读后续写解题三步骤
A crow is not good-looking, but particularly clever and wise. One summer, the long drought dried up the source in the crow's hometown.
The thirsty crow wandered around looking for water. But he could not find water anywhere. The crow decided to move to a new place, where there must be a clear stream. The crow flew for a long time and did not see the river. He felt so exhausted and thirsty that he really wants to drink the water right away. Suddenly, the crow saw a bottle on the ground. There was some water in the bottle. "At last there's water to drink! " The crow flew happily to the bottle. The crow put his beak into the bottle, but the bottle mouth was too small, and the neck was long and narrow. Also the water in the bottle was too low for the crow to drink. The crow is in a hurry.
Story
when
where
who
what
One summer
a clever crow
next to a bottle of water
how
why
a clever crow wanted to drink the water in the bottle right away
5W1H
Beginning
Development
Climax (the main problem or conflict)
Ending (a time to solve the problem/ how things end up)
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Story Mountain
Plot 情节
找到问题或情节发展高潮
乌鸦所在的村庄没水了
乌鸦口渴想喝水,四处寻水
乌鸦发现水
乌鸦想办法喝水
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Emotional change 情感变化
A crow is not good-looking,