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满分技法9 3步法突破8组续写热考话题
第1组 助人为乐
助人为乐话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一, 2020年新高考Ⅰ卷主题为卖爆米花帮助穷人的故事,传递了人间温情。
■这样构思情节
第一步:困难描写(消极情绪+困难处境)
第二步:呈现助人过程(想到办法+动作链)
第三步:皆大欢喜结局(感激+感动+升华)
■这样升华主旨
1.Sometimes, a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
有时小小的善行会有很大影响。
2.Just as the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.”
正如谚语所说:“赠人玫瑰,手有余香。”
3.With one small gesture, you may not only spread love, but also positively influence others’ lives.
小善举,不仅能传递爱,还能积极地影响他人的生活。
4.Actually, a small gesture of care will possibly melt people’s loneliness.
事实上,一个表达关爱的小举动也会融化人们内心的孤单。
5.It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)
伯纳德在他小小的心灵深处感受到,是爱使世界运转。
6.This kind act has a lasting influence on me. I always give others a helping hand if possible.
这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。我总是尽可能地帮助别人。
7.Though many years have passed, I will never forget the lesson he taught me: only when you help those in trouble is life meaningful.
虽然许多年过去了,我永远不会忘记他给我的教训:只有当你帮助那些有困难的人,人生才是有意义的。
8.No good deed ever goes wasted. Therefore, share your love from your heart today and fill your life with good deeds.
好事不会白做。因此,今天就分享你心中的爱,用善行充实你的生活。
第2组 亲情
亲情类话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一, 2021年新高考Ⅰ卷主题为给妈妈做母亲节早餐, 体现家庭成员之间的爱。
■这样构思情节
第一步: 冲突构造(误会、犯错等)
只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有:疏于陪伴、理念不合(代沟)、误会等。
第二步:冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)
第三步:亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)
■这样升华主旨
1.It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。
2.I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter’s love and also, the power of words.
我留着这架小飞机,以提醒女儿对我的爱和语言的力量。
3.Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.
每次面对挑战,我都想放弃,但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。
4.The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us.
透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光,和我们家人之间的爱,温暖了我们。
5.From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he inte