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满分技法8 练记24个满分续写句式
第1组 构建动作链,动作描写更生动
句式1 主语+动作A + and + 动作B或主语+动作A,动作B+and+动作C
微解 连词and连接两个或三个连续的动作
佳句 ①One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. She picked herself up and limped away in tears.
一个妇女被石头绊倒了,她的水罐摔在地上。她爬起来,含着泪一瘸一拐地走了。
②She screamed, pushed him away, and ran into her room.
她尖叫了一声, 一把推开他,然后跑回了自己的房间。
句式2 主语+动作……, 非谓语动词或非谓语动词,主语+动作……
微解 也可用并列连词and连接两个非谓语动词
佳句 ①After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles.
几首歌唱毕,选手们开始在草地上翩翩起舞,他们挥动着双臂,宛如雄鹰。
②He crashed into the stone, spilling the milk everywhere, “What fool put this stone here?” he shouted.
他撞到石头上,把牛奶泼得到处都是,他大喊:“哪个傻瓜把石头放在这儿了?”
第2组 添加状语,动作描写更细化
句式3 主语+谓语+副词/介词短语或副词/介词短语,主语+谓语
微解 副词修饰的动作可以是谓语,也可以是非谓语; 副词可以是描写动作快慢频率等的slowly, frequently等;也可以是描写情感的happily, sadly等。
佳句 ①Then he folds the bill and slowly unfolds it again, as if looking at something he can’t believe is there.
接着,他把钞票对折起来,然后又慢慢摊开,好像在看一个他不相信存在的东西。
②His wife watched the horrible scene, crying hopelessly.
他的妻子看到这可怕的一幕,绝望地哭了。
句式4 主语+动作(谓语或非谓语)+介词短语或介词短语,主语+动作(谓语或非谓语)
微解 介词短语可以是常见的介词短语,或表示情感的介词短语:to+one’s+surprise等表情感的名词,in/with+fear等表情感的名词,如with a heavy heart心情沉重等。
佳句 ①Without thinking, I leaned down and gave her a hug.
我不假思索地俯下身来拥抱了她。
②To his surprise, Chen refused, believing that it would be wrong to accept money that she had not earned.
令他惊讶的是,陈拒绝了,她认为接受自己没有赚到的钱是不对的。
句式5 主语+动作(谓语或非谓语)+ with a ... smile或with a frown/in a ... voice,主语+动作(谓语或非谓语)
佳句 ①“You may try your experiment for a week and see how you like it,” Mrs March said with a smile.
“你可以试一个星期,看看你喜欢不喜欢,”马奇太太笑着说。
②3rd Clerk: (looking at him with a frown) It’s all we have in your size.
店员三:(看着他,皱了皱眉头) 符合你尺码的就只有这件了。
第3组 这样描写情感更细腻
句式6 形容词(短语)作状语,主句
微解 形容词或形容词短语作状语,说明主语的状态或感受。
佳句 ①Disappointed by his behaviour, I said all this to my best friend.
我对他的行为感到失望,便把这一切都告诉了我最好的朋友。
②Embarrassed and ashamed, I can’t concentrate on anything.
尴尬又羞愧,我无法集中注意力做任何事情。
句式7 (a wave of) joy/delight/excite