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满分技法6 报道等其他6类应用文
一、报道、参赛/投稿短文、图画/图表说明类短文
1.报道
满分句式
夺人眼球开头句(简要叙述活动的时间、地点、人物和事件)
①Our school organized an activity called“Learning from Farmers”, where we students helped the farmers pick apples on a farm.
我校组织了一次学农活动,我们学生在农场帮助农民们摘苹果。
②To raise our awareness of labor, the social practice was held at the Gardening Base near our school last Friday.
为提高我们的劳动意识,社会实践活动于上周五在我们学校附近的园艺基地举行。
亮点出彩篇中句(活动发生的主要细节)
①On arriving at the farm, we began with the area of fruit trees and then moved on to the vegetable field. 一到农场,我们就从果树区开始,然后转到菜地。
②While picking watermelons, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields.
在摘西瓜时,我意识到在地里劳作太辛苦了。
③The activity began with a video showing the history of painting facial masks in Peking Opera.
活动从一段展示京剧脸谱画历史的视频开始。
韵味无穷结尾句(对活动进行简要的总结和评论)
①It is through the fruit⁃picking activity that we are aware of the value of working hard.
正是通过采摘活动,我们才意识到努力工作的价值。
②All students think highly of the voluntary activity, from which they benefited a lot.
所有学生高度评价这个志愿者活动,他们从中受益匪浅。
完美佳作
先补写后背诵,同时注意过渡衔接词汇的使用
假定你是校英文报记者。你校的一些学生在当地博物馆进行了志愿者活动,请你写一篇英文报道,内容包括:1.活动时间、地点及内容;2.活动反响及意义。
Last Sunday, thirty volunteers in our school did voluntary work in our local museum. (活动时间、地点)
①Learning that our local museum would be short of tour guides (得知当地博物馆缺少导游) for a big exhibition, some students in our school decided to take action. They contacted the museum and offered to help. ②As arranged (按照安排), they arrived at the museum at 8 am and after some brief preparations, they started to work. ③Visitors from home and abroad were deeply impressed by their knowledge and vivid explanations (来自国内外的参观者对他们的知识和生动的解释印象深刻). Their voluntary work was also praised by the staff in the museum. (活动内容)
It was a very meaningful activity. ④Not only did they help others, but they also benefited a lot from the experience(他们不仅帮助了别人,而且从这次经历中受益匪浅,倒装句). (活动反响及意义)
2.参赛/投稿短文
满分句式
记人
①The person I respect most is my father, who is a teacher patient with each student.
我最尊敬的人是我的父亲,他是一位耐心对待每一个学生的老师。
②Though he