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第二部分　16类规范保应用文得13+ 满分技法5　10类书信写规范——让阅卷老师判定五档 一、求助信和建议信 1.求助信 满分句式 夺人眼球开头句(说明目的) ①I’m writing to seek help from you/ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand, as I meet with/come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign. 我写信请你帮忙,因为我在策划一个绿色校园活动时遇到了一些问题。 ②Faced with/In the face of so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help. 面对这个难题,我别无选择只得向你求助。 亮点出彩篇中句(说明困惑或难题) ①What bothers me is that I am at a loss/have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home. 困扰我的事情是我不知道如何在家里复习功课。 ②I have much trouble/bother in concentrating on online classes, making me really frustrated. 我很难专心上网课,使我很苦恼。 ③I’m stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have organized similar activities. 我被难住了,知道你组织过类似活动,所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。 ④I feel greatly stressed, so would you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to relieve stress? 我现在压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗? 韵味无穷结尾句(表达感谢,期待回复) ①I would be very grateful if you could spare me some time to help me deal with the problem. 如果你能抽时间帮我处理这个问题我将不胜感激。 ②I’d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance/instructions/help/assistance. 如果你能给我一些指导/帮助,我将不胜感激。 完美佳作 先补写后背诵,同时注意过渡衔接词汇的使用 假设你是李华,最近你要参加主题为“My Dream University”的英语演讲比赛。你的外国好友Jack经常参加各种大型比赛,比赛经验非常丰富。赛前你向他征求意见,请根据以下要点写一封邮件,内容包括:1.陈述写信目的;2.寻求具体意见;3.表示真诚感谢。 Dear Jack, How are you recently? I’m going to participate in an English Speech Competition themed My Dream University. Time ticking by, I’m getting increasingly nervous, so I’m eager for your advice. (说明事由和写信目的) As you have taken part in various competitions and have rich experience in delivering public speeches, ①I’d appreciate it if you could give me some practical suggestions (如果你能给我一些实用的建议我将不胜感激). How can I adjust my mindset, better my contents and hold the attention from audience? I’m convinced that ②with your help, I’ll have an excellent performance (在你的帮助下,我会表现出色). (说明问题+寻求具体意见) ③Thanks a lot from the bottom of my heart (我由衷地感谢你). Looking forward to y