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满分技法4 10类衔接比他人连贯——让阅卷老师赞叹
高考阅卷老师说:缺乏衔接过渡的文章,就好比一串断了线的珍珠,每个词句虽光彩夺目,拿出来却七零八落,不堪受用。要想成就美文,不仅需要高级词汇,还需穿珠之线,这个线就是衔接过渡
1.吸引眼球的段落起始过渡
过渡词
first of all, in the first place, to begin/start with, firstly, generally (speaking)
从句
as we know, as is known to us, as is shown in...; as is often the case, as a saying goes
Generally speaking, the more you practice, the more skillfully you can write in English.
一般来说,你练习得越多,你的英语写作就越娴熟。
2.条理分明的时序用语
表“现在;
最近”
nowadays/now, at present, currently, recently
表“首先,
第一”
first/firstly, to begin/start with, in the first place/first of all
表“后来,不
久,然后”
after, afterwards/later on, after that, after a while, before long, shortly after, soon
表“在此期
间,同时”
meanwhile/meantime, in the meantime, at the same time, while
表“最后”
ultimately/finally/lastly/eventually, in the end/at last
①In the end, I sincerely hope that you can have a 10⁃minute question and answer session. (2022·北京卷满分作文)
最后,我真诚地希望你能有10分钟的问答环节。
②At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.
就在这时,我的父母回来了,他们非常惊讶地看到所有房间都很整洁,地板闪闪发亮。
3.层次分明的空间顺序
on one side ... on the other side ..., on the opposite side, in front of, in the center of, in the distance, in the middle of, at the back of, on/to the left/right, close to, next to, nearby, beyond等
Down the middle of the valley runs a clear, fast stream in which one may fish. In the low land along the stream are the farmlands; beyond them is the grassland. Behind the tops of the first hills are the big mountains.
一条清澈湍急的溪流沿着山谷的中部流淌着,人们可以在溪中钓鱼。沿溪而下,低地处是农田;越过农田是草原。第一层丘陵后是一座座大山。
4.第二、三个要点前的递进
besides/moreover/furthermore/what’s more/in addition/
additionally/also/plus
apart from/as well as, more importantly, last but not least, worse still/what’s worse/to make matters worse
①More importantly, I am willing to help others, so I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.
更重要的是,我愿意帮助他人,所以我想在业余时间当一名志愿者。
②The car broke down when I was driving home from work, and what was w