Unit 2 Be sporty, be healthy -【同步写作课】2023-2024学年高一英语单元写作深度指导（译林版2019必修第二册）
必修第二册Unit 2单元写作指导与演练
Encouraging a friend to work out regularly
单元写作早知道 | 写作任务 | 本单元的写作任务是写一篇建议信。 建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。 |
常用表达 | 1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 2. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 3. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 |
单元话题 | 真题展示 | 高考链接 |
定期锻炼 | 2023年全国1卷 | 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。 |
Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice. | 假定你是李华，你校外教要举办口语培训班，让练习口语的所有的学生两人一组练习，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，说说原因和提建议。 |
建议信应用非常广泛，也是英语高考作文常考的体裁。话题一般要求给对方的各种烦恼以建议，如压
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力、失败、人际关系紧张等。或给项目策划如栏目优化等提出内容建议。亦或给对方的计划或兴趣提出方法建议，等等。
建议信的写作步骤
第一步：审题（文体建议信；主题；人称多用第二人称；时态用一般现在时态；要点）
第二步：谋篇布局（三段式较受青睐）{paragraph1引入（针对某一问题）+写信目的（提建议）Paragraph2提出合适建议+理由 paragraph3希望建议有帮助并表达祝愿}
第一段：了解到对方的情况，表明要提建议。
中间段：具体的建议内容及理由；
最后一段：盼望建议有帮助/对方能采纳。
内容 | 表述 |
◆Para.1 说明写信的目的 | I'm sorry you have trouble in... I am writing to share some advice with you. 我很遗憾你在……（方面）遇到了困难，我正在写信是想和你分享一些建议。 You have asked me for my advice about/on… and I will try to give you my suggestions. 你向我征求关于……的意见，我将试着给你提供建议。 I am writing to express my views on... 我正在写信是想表达我对……的看法。 |
◆ Para.2 提出建议和改进措施并给予忠告 | I suggest/recommend/think that you should… 我建议/推荐/认为你应该…… You may/might/can consider doing... 你可以考虑做…… I think it would be a good idea to… 我认为……将是个好主意。 In my opinion, it would be wise to... 在我看来，......将是明智的选择。 As far as I am concerned, you’d better ... 就我而言，你最好... Why not...?/Why don't you...? 为什么不......？/你为什么不......？ |
◆ Para.3 希望建议被采纳并期待回复 | I hope you will find these proposals (suggestions/ tips) practical/ useful/helpful. 我希望你会发现这些提议（建议/提示）实用/有用/有帮助。 |
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| I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more detail. 我愿意与你更详细地讨论这个问题。 I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。 I will be glad if you will consider my advice. 如果你能考虑我的建议，我会很高兴的。 I hope you will take my advice into account. 我希望你能考虑我的建议。 |
【小试牛刀】
Dear Su Ru，
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
To begin with，why not be a friend if you want to make friends？In addition，wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a saying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least，wouldn’t it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends? It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
All the best.
Yours，
Li Hua.
【篇首句】说明写信目的。 | 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。 |
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