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浙江省绍兴市2024届高三一模考试)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友David刚升入高中,但因一时无法适应新的校园生活而焦虑,写信向你倾诉他的烦恼。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:1.分析可能的原因;2.给出合理的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段分析可能的原因(要点1);第二段提出合理建议(要点2);第三段期待早日适应高中生活。
跟着课本学句型(B1U1 reading for writing)
I understand how you feel(表达同理心
I know what your problem is (明确问题
This is my advice & reason (提出建议及理由)
I think my advice will help.(表达希望)
表示同情:
I feel terribly sorry to hear/ know/learn that ...
I know well how it feels to ...
I know you didn't mean to ...
I know you have trouble in ...
It happens to everyone.
Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going
wrong.
Take it easy and things will be better
It's quite natural/normal/common to……
提建议:
Making suggestions
Why don't you/You'd better ...?
It couldn't be better if you could ...I think it would be beneficial if you could ...
It will make a difference if you ...
It's advisable/ recommended to do ...
You may/ might as well do ...
You may consider doing...
From my point of view, it would be wise/ reasonable/ a good idea to do ...
If I were you, I would……
谋篇布局:
Para.1 背景 +意图(表达同理心+表明意图)
Dear David
Extremely sorry to hear that you're anxious about adjusting to high school, I'm here to offer you some practical advice.
Para.2 原因(why)
Actually, it's quite normal to feel unease when you step into anew environment since you are . To deal with it, I suggest you talk to teachers about any difficulties you encounter, who are available to provide valuable guidance. Besides, it would be beneficial to take part in school activities, clubs, or sports where you can meet like-minded souls.
Para.3 祝愿/期待(表达期待)
I do hope my suggestions can be of some help
Hopefully, you will give my suggestions some thought
I hope my suggestions prove helpful to you.
Wish you a smooth adjustment to high school life!
All the best!
下水作文1
Dear David,
I'm sorry to learn that you are at a loss for your freshman year. It is not unusual for stude