2024届高考英语复习读后续写专题：写作技巧课件

妙招1 巧用形容词/副词短语 ①Disappointed and frustrated, David hung his head, trying to avoid eye contact with me.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷) ②Happily and excitedly, they went to the supermarket for what they needed. 妙招2　巧用分词(短语) ①Seeing his face filled with anxiety, I felt sad, deciding to talk something with him.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷) ②A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Hurrying home, he couldn’t wait to see his old friend Poppy.(2020浙江1月卷) 妙招3 巧用高级句式 ①I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My brother came up with an idea that he could cut the pumpkin with a knife. (同位语从句)(2021浙江1月卷) 我被困了五六分钟，虽然感觉要长得多。我的弟弟想出了一个主意，他可以用小刀把南瓜切开。 ②At the very moment, the helicopter arrived. It hovered over the camp, causing strong wind that blew the bear unsteady on his feet. (非谓语动词+定语从句)(2020浙江7月卷) 就在这时，直升机到了。它在营地上空盘旋，刮起大风，把熊吹得双脚不稳。 妙招4 巧用倒装结构 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Hardly had the little dog come out when Poppy came over to lick it as if it were a long-lost friend. (2020浙江1月卷) 爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。小狗刚出来，波比就过来舔它，好像它是一个失散多年的朋友。 妙招5 巧用强调句结构 That video was posted the day before Halloween. It wasmy brother who did that for amusement.(2021浙江1月卷) 那段视频是在万圣节前一天发布的。那是我弟弟为了消遣才那样做的。 2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷 It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线) through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence.He was small for ten years old.His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children.He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfor- tably. “I gave