应用文写作 要求重改作文分数 讲义-2024届高三英语一轮复习

2023年11月南京六校高三联考 假定你是高三学生李华，在上周的年级读后续写(continuation writing)竞赛中，你的续写得分为16分(满分25分)，你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给评委 Mr. Davis用英语写一份邮件，内容包括：1. 说明问题；2. 给出理由。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Davis, Yours sincerely, Li Hua 这个作文题很接地气，贴近学生生活。平时月考或联考后，都会有学生向我抱怨：作文分太低啊！ 下水作文1： Hi Mr. Davis, I’m Li Hua, a high school senior who participated in the continuation writing competition last week. I think the score (16 points out of 25) you gave me falls short of my expectations. Firstly, my composition is rich in content and its plot is well organized, which are in line with the requirements of continuing a story. Secondly, in terms of language, I’ve attempted to use a variety of sentence structures without any grammatical errors. I sincerely hope that you can reconsider my score and give my composition a fairer and more reasonable evaluation. (94 words) Yours sincerely, Li Hua 参考译文： 我是李华，一名参加了上周读后续写比赛的高三学生。我认为你给我的16分(满分25分)没有达到我的期望值。首先，我的作文内容丰富，情节布局十分严谨，符合故事续写的要求。其次，在语言方面，我尝试使用多样化的句子结构，没有出现任何语法错误。我真诚地希望您能重新考虑我的分数，给我的作文一个更加公平合理的评价。 下水文2： Dear Mr. Davis, I'm Li Hua, a contestant in your continuation writing competition held last week. The score, 16 points out of 25was far from my expectation, so I'm writing to express my concerns. First and foremost, having carefully studied samples,I bet the plots and content of my writing are reasonable and complete, blending seamlessly with the given passage.Besides, a diverse and appropriate range of vocabulary and grammar structures are employed. Ultimately, to maintain an overall structure, coherence and consistency,connecting phrases between paragraphs and sentences are also utilized. Considering the effort invested in my continuation,sincerely request a more detailed feedback or clarification on the specific aspects that led to the assigned score of 16.Thanks for your time.(122w) Yours sincerely. Lihua 下水作文3 Dear Mr. Davis, I’m Li Hua, a senior three student. I’m writing to consult with you o