Diana与流浪狗的故事（绍兴一模2023.11.9）讲义-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

来源：绍兴一模续写 话题:人和动物友好相处，爱，善良 文本分析 I'm retired and not responsible for much these days. I don't have school-age children who require help with their homework. I sleep in when I choose, do a little writing and repair a few things around the house. My wife's work, on the other hand, is never-ending.（注意妻子工作的特点：永无止境的）Diana takes care other parents in their mid-nineties, tends to home and garden, volunteers for various community organizations, and is a gold-star grandmother. She is also a dedicated cat lover, and cats have always been her pet of choice.（注意：在下文中妻子的喜欢发生了改变） All that changed when two small black-and-brown dogs scampered into our yard and melted Diana's heart. It happened not long ago. The dogs appeared unannounced and had been seen by hikers on numerous occasions, roaming the woods like tiny lost souls. They were homeless dogs, as wild as the wind. No one could get within 100 yards of them.（突出两只狗的也行与不好相处）  In their struggle for survival, the two had figured out a way to avoid people（为下文写Diana女里用爱来感化它们从而接近它们做铺垫）and find food and shelter in the wilderness. They were undeniably cute and appealing. Many of our neighbors tried to lure them in with treats, but the tiny dogs remained unapproachable. （此处写邻居的努力仍然得不到小狗的亲近，为下文Diana的举动做铺垫）My wife began leaving tasty food out, slowly moving the food bowl closer with each feeding. As days passed, they ventured closer and closer. Diana made a conscious effort not to frighten them. She called them to dinner with a comforting voice, letting them know they were safe. It was important that they trusted her. Why? She was looking for something to mother. For Diana, love is the medicine to everything, （突出 Diana乐于分享爱的特点）and nothing tugged at her heartstrings more than a hungry and homeless animal. Diana named them “Emma”and “Daisy” and she called the dogs her “little wolves.”Initially, they would not let her touch them. As days turned into weeks, their bond slowly grew. Soon, Diana was petting them. Next, they were eating from her