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记叙文写作--活动安排
· 叙事类短文写作框架:
【活动概括】某人在某时某地做了某事,对某事的评价----总
【活动描写】
1. 细节(具体语境下的动作,可适当发挥的部分)
2. 过渡(时间、逻辑)
3. 心理描写
【总结升华】情感升华+主题响应
· 记叙文语言框架---开头段
句式1:With the aim of doing sth., ...took place / was held in ... at...on...
为了【目的】,【活动名称】将于【地点】【时间】举行。
例1:为了提升学生的口语水平,我们学校上周举办了英语演讲比赛。
With the aim of improving the students’ spoken English, an English speech contest was held in our school last week.
活动目的语料包:
①锻炼身体:build up one’s body
②激发兴趣:set off interest; cultivate a taste for
③亲近大自然:get close to nature
④增进友谊:promote / strengthen the friendship
⑤开拓眼界:widen / broaden one’s horizons
⑥缓解压力:relieve / ease pressure / stress
⑦庆祝节日:celebrate / observe ...
⑧传承中国传统文化:preserve traditional cultures
⑨加强我们(参与者)对...的理解和欣赏:
Enhance our (participants’) understanding and appreciation of...
⑩增添色彩:enrich our life / add colour to our life
句式2: Time rewinding to..., ..., together with..., did sth...., which left a deep impression on us.
时光倒流到...,...和...一起...,给我们留下了深刻的印象。
例1:时光倒流到上周,我和同学们一起参加了一个以“地球日”为主题的有意义的活动,给我们留下了深刻的印象。
Time rewinding to last week, I, together with my classmates, took part in a meaningful activity whose theme was Earth Day, which left a deep impression on us.
句式3:【与2重复,可替换】
...(时间)’s ...still remains fresh in my mind, which turned out to be considerably worthwhile/rewarding.
...的...活动在我的脑海中依然历历在目,结果让我觉得非常值得。
· 记叙文语言框架---第二段
如何叙述互动:1. 整装待发 2. 一路开怀 3. 活动高潮 4. 时光飞逝
· 整装待发
After all preparations had been made,
After being fully prepared, we gathered at...and set out for...in high spirits.
在充分准备之后,我们在...集合,兴致勃勃地向...进发。
例1:上午8点,在充分准备之后,我们聚集在大青山脚下,兴致勃勃地向山顶出发。
At 8:00 a.m., after being fully prepared, we gathered at the foot of the mountain, and set out for the mountain top in high spirits.
· 一路开怀
Bathed in warm sunshine, we were..., ... and ... all the way, enjoying the...and the ...
沐浴在温暖的阳光中,我们一路上..., ....、...,享受着...和...
例1:沐浴在温暖的阳光中,我们一路谈笑风生,享受着新鲜的空气和美丽的风景。
Bathed in warm sunshine, we were talking and laughing all the way, enjoying the fresh air and beautiful scenery.
· 活动高潮
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