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导学第一步——想一想·跟着教材学写作
【教材原文】 【写作借鉴】
Give Ugly a Chance!
When it comes to wildlife protection, all species—the good, the bad, and the ugly—should be treated equally.Pandas, dolphins, and other cute wildlife are important, but we must pay attention to less cute animals, too.The world needs all kinds—without variety, our planet cannot survive.So if you want the future to be beautiful, you have to give ugly a chance.
Don't Make Paper with My Home!
Billions of trees are being cut down every year to make paper for humans.Every tree that is cut down is a part of the habitat of animals such as these koalas.In this way a lot of animal homes are being destroyed!Is it right to make animals homeless so that humans can have more paper?
一、学语言表达
第一段
1.本段前面两个破折号的使用,起到了分项列举或概括前面列举的事物的作用,第三个破折号表示补充说明,从而使语言表达更加严谨,内容更加丰富。
2.本段一个时间状语从句When it comes to...和一个条件状语从句if you want...to...的使用起到了引起下文的作用,语气比较委婉礼貌,突显了作者使用高级句式表达的功底。
第二段
本段第三句用感叹句,强烈抒发了作者的观点情感;第四句使用了一个反问句以加强语气,发人深思,增强了文章的气势和说服力。
二、学行文结构
1.写作框架
2.过渡衔接:过渡词语but、so等的应用使文章更具有逻辑性,更有条理性。
导学第二步——背一背·循着话题积素材
(1)常用词汇
①wildlife n. 野生动植物
②hunt v. 猎杀;捕猎
③decrease v. 减少
④reserve n. 保护区
⑤distribution n. 分布
⑥endangered adj. 濒危的
⑦species n. 种类;物种
⑧protect v. 保护
⑨loss n. 失去
⑩disappear v. 消失
⑪existence n. 存在
⑫habitat n. 栖息地
⑬reduction n. 减少
⑭in harmony with 与……和谐相处
⑮die out 灭绝
(2)常用句式
①As we know, kinds of endangered animals are dying out at an alarming rate.
众所周知,多种濒临灭绝的动物正以惊人的速度消亡。
②If people keep cutting down the forests,the wild animals will have nowhere to live.
如果人们继续砍伐森林,野生动物将无处安身。
③I wonder if laws will be made to punish those who kill animals more severely.
我想知道是否能制定一些法律来严惩那些捕杀动物的人。
④Elephants would be in danger of dying out if men are allowed to shoot them as many as they wish.
如果允许人们随心所欲地射杀大象,大象就会有灭绝的危险。
⑤Air and water are being polluted so that the environment in which animals live is destroyed.
空气和水正受到污染,以至于动物生存的环境会被破坏。
导学第三步——