UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ Writing（Word教参）-【优化指导】2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第一册（外研版2019）

Section Ⅴ　Writing 叙事类记叙文 [对应学生用书P88] 叙事类记叙文 开头 交代事件的背景、人物、时间、地点 如教材P35的课文第一段 人物→I；时间→yesterday； 地点→my room 主体 叙述事件发生的原因、经过和结果 第二段第一句是原因：妈妈生日时，我想为她做炒蛋 第二、三段主要讲述事情的经过：我把鸡蛋炒焦了，但妈妈说好吃 第三段最后一句是结果：我们都笑了 结尾 发表感想，进行总结 课文最后一段“这次不会把鸡蛋做糊了” 本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素(时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果)交代清楚。 (一)基本结构 1．开头——交代清楚事件的背景； 2．主体——主要叙述事件发生的原因、经过及结果； 3．结尾——呼应标题，发表感想、愿望等。 (二)注意事项 1．标题：如有标题，标题一定要明确，能点明事件或主题； 2．人称：通常用第一人称和第三人称； 3．时态：在叙事过程中，一般用过去时态。在描写背景或某景象时，常用过去进行时，这样显得更加生动形象。 (一)常用开头句 1．We set out/set off/started at 7：20 by bus/by bike/on foot/by plane/by train. 我们7：20乘公共汽车/骑自行车/步行/乘飞机/坐火车出发。 2．This morning，I was busy preparing for my test when I heard ... 今天上午我正在忙着准备测试，这时我听到…… 3．In order to encourage the students to do ...our school organised ... 为了鼓励学生们做……我们学校组织了…… (二)常用中间句 1．①All the flights had been canceled because of the heavy rain，so all the passengers had to take the train. ②All the flights had been canceled because of the heavy rain；as a result，all the passengers had to take the train. ③All the flights having been canceled because of the heavy rain，all the passengers had to take the train. 由于大雨，所有的航班都被取消了，乘客们不得不改乘火车。 2．①We didn't spend so much time in Guilin as I had hoped. ②The time we spent in Guilin was not so much as I had hoped. 我们在桂林逗留的时间没有像我希望的那样长。 3．①On hearing someone calling for help，he did not hesitate to jump into the river. ②Hardly had he heard someone calling for help when he jumped into the river without hesitation. ③No sooner had he heard someone calling for help than he jumped into the river without hesitation. 一听见有人呼救，他就毫不犹豫地跳入河中。 4．It reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. 这使我想起了我的妈妈，她总是尽她所能给予我最好的。 5．After reading the passage，I was lost in thought.From my own perspective，however busy parents are，they should spare time to accompany their children. 读完这篇文章，我陷入了沉思。从我个人的角度看，不管父母有多忙，他们都应该挤出时间陪伴他们的孩子。 6．Actually，everyone should