读后续写中式英语之鉴及升级修改（2） 讲义-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

1.Could you lead me to the store? 升级为：Could you please direct me to the store?你能带我去商店吗？ 2.quickened her pace to home 升级为：hastened her steps towards home 她加快了回家的步伐 3.put the apple on the bed gently 升级为：placed it gently on the bed轻轻地把它放在床上 4.He thumped up to kitty 升级为：He gave a thumb-up to kitty他向凯蒂竖起大拇指 5.Hearing the gentleman's words, kitty's eyes were widened with great surprise and the unbounded astonishment nearly rooted her to the spot. 升级为：Hearing the gentleman's words, Kitty's eyes widened in great surprise and she was almost paralyzed by the overwhelming astonishment. 吉蒂听了那人的话，惊奇地瞪大了眼睛，她几乎被这种难以抑制的惊奇惊呆了 6.After getting the little treasure, kitty expressed her gratitude towards the gentleman and said goodbye. 升级为：After receiving the small treasure, the cat expressed her gratitude to the man and bid him farewell. 收到宝贝（苹果）后，Kitty向男人表达了感激之情，并向他告别。 7.Then, kitty turned to accomplish her school work and do the domestic chores for her mother. 升级为：Then Kitty turned her attention towards completing her school work and assisting with household chores. 然后基蒂把注意力转向完成功课和帮忙做家务 8.indicated her love for kitty in a quiet way 升级为：demonstrated her love for kitty in a subtle manner以微小的方式表达她对基蒂的爱 9.she was rooted to the ground, her mind going blank. 升级为：She was frozen in place, her mind emptying.她僵在原地，脑子里空空如也。 10.red apples which she missed for the whole day 升级为：red apples that she had been longing for all day盼望了一整天的大红苹果 11.Kitty couldn't help but keep expressing her gratitude to the gentleman and hold the apples with both hands, like a treasure. 升级为：Kitty couldn't help but continuously express her gratitude to the gentleman and tightly clutch the apples , treating them as if they were a valuable treasure.凯蒂忍不住不停地向这位绅士表达她的感激之情，紧紧地攥着苹果，把它们当作有价值的宝贝。 12.Raising up from bed, her mother robbed her eyes. 升级为：Rising from her bed, her mother rubbed her weary eyes.她母亲从床上站起来，揉了揉疲倦的眼睛。 13.I resolved to purchase some red apples for you as a little gift for your honesty. 升级为：I resolved to pur