Unit 11 第5课时 Section B Writing-【勤径学升】2023-2024学年九年级下册英语同步练测配套PPT课件（人教版）

九年级英语 （下册） Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 第5课时　Section B Writing 如何写有关事物对人们的影响的文章 话题分析 本单元主要谈论身边的人或事给自己带来的情绪变化。写此类文章时， 可以通过描述一件具体的事情来表达自己的喜、怒、哀、乐， 也可以描写生活或学习中的烦恼或焦虑， 并给出自己的看法或建议。 写作实践 (苏州) 假定你是苏华， 最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误， 他倍感懊恼， 写了一封邮件向你诉说。为帮助他排解困惑， 请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历， 用英语回信开导他。 To: suhua@china．com From: nathan@australia．com Subject: Learning from mistakes Dear Su Hua, I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently.They're troubling me a lot these days, I really need your help.Would you please share your experience with me? 　　•Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes? •Can you tell me one of your mistakes? •How did you deal with your problem? •What have you learned from the mistake? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best， Nathan 要求： 1.词数90左右， 开头和结尾已经写好， 不计入总词数； 2．回复须包括所有要点， 可适当发挥， 使短文连贯、通顺； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Nathan, I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. I hope my experience can help you out. Best wishes, Su Hua 思路导引 eq \x(\a\al(段,落,布,局)) eq \b\lc\{(\a\vs4\al\co1(\x(\a\al(点明,主题))→You needn't worry too much. It's , true that everyone makes mistakes.,\x(\a\al(介绍“我”,的经历))\b\lc\{(\a\vs4\al\co1(1.forgot to do my homework,2.said sorry to my teacher； ,　finished it the next day,3.found it important to achieve ,　a balance between schoolwork,　and hobbies)),\x(\a\al(重申,主题))\b\lc\{(\a\vs4\al\co1(1.It doesn't matter whether or not you,　make mistakes.,2.What matters most is to correct and ,　learn from them.)))) 佳作展示 Dear Nathan, I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much.It's true that everyone makes mistakes. Take me for example.One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework.I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day.I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes.What matters most is to correct and learn fro