读后续写公开课-情绪描写进阶版 课件 -2024届高考英语作文复习专项

How to describe emotions more vividly and specifically？ 读后续写之情绪描写技能 Learning objective Master some skills to make emotional description more vivid and specific. 读 后 续 写 高 考 真 题 题 号 问题 原 因 办 法 体裁 主题思想 2022新高考I 患有脑疾的小男孩参加越野比赛 赛前他信心动摇想要放弃 I watched as David moved… 教练鼓励他积极面对困难，战胜自我 记叙文 战胜自我 2021新高考Ⅰ 双胞胎做早餐把厨房弄得一团糟 给母亲惊喜,庆祝母亲节 … their father appeared 父亲助攻 记叙文 母亲节惊喜 2020新高考Ⅰ Bernard如何赚钱帮助养家 经济衰退 John had an idea: 做爆米花卖钱 记叙文 助人献爱心 2020.07 浙江 野熊来到营地前 熊闻到面包大蒜气味 tried known actions: ... 辣椒水 直升飞机 记叙文 险境求生 2020.01 浙江 小宠物狗郁郁寡欢 小主人上大学 Mum had an idea: 给它买个狗伴 记叙文 让宠物狗 高兴起来 3 四个步骤 2.细读首句，构思框架 仔细阅读所给两段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。 1.读懂大意，理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。 4.修改润色，整洁誊写 思考再三，把修正润色后的续写整洁地写入答卷。 3.增加细节，开始写作 依据情节发展和常识，在确定的框架内，可按“所见/遇所想，所为所感”等构思具体细节。 5W+1H: who when where what why how 环境描写,语言描写, 动作描写, 情绪描写, 心理描写, 检查错误升级句式 注意衔接 4 Lead-in Enjoy a video clip to learn some common emotions. (2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. 探究高考真题 （2022新高考-越野比赛）To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet. (2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating. 请找出下列句子中的情绪描写表达，并用横线标出。 (2021新高考1.读后续写) The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. 启动计时器 时间到！ 时间限制： 1 分钟 7 (2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. 探究高考真题 （2022新高考-越野比赛）To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet. (2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating. 请找出下列句子中的情绪描写表达，并用横线标出。 (2021新高考1.读后续写) The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleas