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It was the middle of the day with the bright sun, blue sky, green grass, and a soft breeze (微风).It was a great day to play outside and the best day of my life because I got a new ball and a new bike as my sixth birthday presents , and I was visiting my cousin , Kristy , at her house.
“Here I go!” shouted David while kicking my new ball. David lived next door and was older than me. I thought he was a wild child , but he was actually very kind. The ball went flying as if it were going to space. “That was high!” Kristy said in surprise and we went after the ball. We all had a great time.
Later we had supper and the food my aunt made was good. While Kristy was helping do the dishes,David and I ran outside to play! We started taking turns riding my bike. David suggested that we ride it to the forest. And I agreed. David and I got on the bike and David started riding fast!
As we rode through the forest, I felt the wind brushing my face! It felt so great and free. Suddenly the bike hit a fallen branch and we went flying off the bike. Lying on the ground , I felt dizzy(眩晕的).I checked myself for injuries and saw some but they didn't upset me.
“David!” I shouted out anxiously.
“Hey ,” said a voice. I turned my head and it was David, who was standing behind me holding my broken bike! At the sight of my disabled bike, I was so sad that I couldn't hold back my tears. It took David some time to calm me down.
Para.1: When we realized it was time to walk home , we found ourselves lost.
Para.2: It was completely dark when we saw fireworks(烟花)being set off in the distance.
故事线发展:
I got birthday presents--I played ball with David and Kristy---We had supper.Kristy helped do the dishes .David and I started riding bikes.---I and David flew off the bike.---I got injured---I got injured
---I shouted out---My broken bike made me cry---David calmed me down.
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Para.1: When we realized it was time to walk home , we found ourselves lost. In terror for being lost,I was shaken wi