内容正文:
怎么写询问信?
本堂课我们将学:
1.什么是询问信?
2.什么是好的询问信?
3.怎么写出好的询问信?
Miss Hao (M) -
1.什么是询问信?
询问信是写信人对某方面信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。
Miss Hao (M) -
2.什么是好的询问信?
step 1 :真题满分佳作赏析
Miss Hao (M) -
【2014全国新课标1卷:夏令营信息咨询】
假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
满分佳作(一)
Dear Sir / Madam,
①I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course.
②First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. ③Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
满分赏析:
①第一句进行自我情况介绍,
第二句点明写信的目的。
这样显得大方得体。
考生切记不要只完成询问的内容,否则书信就显得唐突了。
满分佳作(一)
Dear Sir / Madam,
①I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course.
②First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. ③Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
满分赏析: ②后面的咨询点用到了First, Besides等连词,条理清晰。
③在问住宿类型时,考生提出了自己的选项:是住接待家庭(host family)还是大学的宿舍(dormitory)。是很适度的拓展。
满分佳作(二)
Dear Sir/Madam,
①My name is Li Hua and I am a student from China. I saw your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to attend the six-week English course you offer during my summer vacation. I am writing to ask for more information about it.
②First of all, I’d like to know when the classes will start and