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满分技法3 24个续写句式——让续写最吸睛
第1组 无“灵”主语句,写“情”最细腻
[句式1]
a burst/wave/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feeling of+表情感状态的名词+有灵动词+sb.表“某人感到……”或“一阵/一种……向某人袭来”
[微解]
用于该句式的有灵动词(短语)有:seize/take hold of “抓住;攫住”,get the better of/defeat “击垮”,sweep/flood/rush over “袭来”,run through/pass through “掠过”,tear ...into pieces “把……撕碎”,creep upon/on “袭来”,come over “影响”,fail “使失望;有负于”,escape “被忘掉;被忽视”,choke “使哽咽”,desert “背离”等。
[佳句]
①Suffering and despair defeated me,and I fell sobbing on the doorstep.(《简·爱》)
痛苦和绝望击垮了我,我倒在门阶上哭泣。
②(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)Mother felt a wave of pride and warmth sweep over her.
妈妈感到一阵自豪和温暖。
③(2020·浙江卷)The polar bear came near.Horror slowly crept on/flooded over/rushed over/swept over us.
北极熊走近了。恐惧慢慢向我们袭来。
[句式2]
主语是表示身体部位或“音、容、笑”的名词+有灵动词(短语)
[微解]
这类名词有:face,eye,heart,hand,finger,laughter,smile,tears,voice等; 动词(短语)有:flash “掠过”,brighten/light up “照亮”,well up “涌出”,spread across “浮现”,fill ...with ...“用……装满”,cloud over “显得阴沉(恐惧、愤怒、忧愁)”等。
[佳句]
①I was relieved when a bright,sweet voice interrupted us.(《简·爱》)
一个清亮甜美的声音打断了我们,我松了一口气。
②(2020·浙江卷)At the sight of the frightening wolf,I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
看到那只可怕的狼,我吓得喉咙发紧,两腿发软。
③When she realized the little boy had lied,a look of disappointment passed over/spread across/flashed/crossed her face.
意识到小男孩儿说了谎时,她的脸上掠过失望的神情。
[句式3]
表行为或动作的名词+有灵动词
[微解]
常见的表行为或动作的名词有sight,taste,smell,thought,sense,idea,visit,arrival等。谓语是send,remind,make,leave,drive (驱使)等有灵动词。
[佳句]
①The thought of going back to Thornfield for an evening with Mrs Fairfax bored me.(《简·爱》)
一想到要和费尔法克斯太太一起回桑菲尔德过夜,我就厌烦了。
②The thought of getting lost in such darkness filled us with worry and fear.
想到可能在这样的黑暗中迷路,我们既担忧又害怕。
③Many troubles visited the poor old lady last year.
这位可怜的老妇人去年遇到了许多麻烦事。
[句式4]
表自然现象等的名词+有灵动词
[微解]
这类名词有:fog,snow,night,earthquake等。谓语是:fall,blanket (覆盖),come,strike,hit,threaten 等有灵动词。
[佳句]
①A storm was gathering,but we stayed there until thunder and lightning crashed.(《简·爱》)
暴风雨即将来临,但我们一直待在那里,直到雷电交加。
②Night fell,the wind grew stronger,