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满分技法2 懂3冲突+4途径——让续写最精彩
读后续写的续写内容从命题角度来看都会围绕“Conflict & Solution”展开。结合历年考查的题材来看,题材主要关于:人间自有真情系列、迷路系列、脱险系列、争吵系列。解决方案基本是以下途径:
①encouragement(某人的鼓励)
②comfort(某人的安慰)
③inspiration(突然灵机一动)
④effort(自己的努力训练)
⑤calm(冷静思考)
⑥kindness(某人的善行)
⑦courage(勇敢做起来)
⑧love(需要结合感化、耐心和等待)
⑨help(及时帮助)
具体见下表:
Conflict & Emotion 3冲突
人间自有真情系列
主人公遇到贫困、残疾或孤独、失败、自卑等困境
love,kind,generous,sympathetic,sad
脱险系列
摆脱危险的动物、人、环境或在丛林、山中等迷路
sacred,nervous,
upset,frightened
争吵系列
误解、背叛(信任)、伤害(自尊等)、观念、性格、兴趣不一
disappointed,shy,confused,regretful,angry,embarrassed
Solution & Emotion
4途径
他人
善行和爱、及时帮助、安慰和鼓励、陪伴等
情节中:
①镇定(calm);
②鼓舞(encouraged);
③不满(dissatisfied)
结尾:
①欣慰、欢喜
(relieved,delighted);
②感动、感恩
(moved,grateful);
③希望、信心
(hopeful,confident)
他物
河流、太阳等
自己
努力、灵机一动、勇气
自然
和谐、时间与成长
当然这个解决方案(solution)可能是以上多种组合,比如先平静下来(calm),然后有了勇气(courage),最后有了动力(inspiration)。
如2020年新高考全国卷Ⅰ读后续写思路可以是:先冷静(calm)思考,再灵机一动(inspired),最后努力(effort)用行动做好爆米花,最终用爱(love)和及时帮助(help)使Bernard摆脱了困境。
[典例]
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the ot