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专题一　应用文写作 满分攻略第3步　词汇比他人亮——赢高分 1 层级十一　吸引眼球的亮点词汇 高考阅卷通常在1分钟内阅完一篇习作，由于长时间阅卷带来的疲劳，大众化的词汇只能让阅卷老师感到越来越困乏。但如果一篇作文中有几个不落俗套的高级词汇，则会让阅卷老师眼前一亮、精神一振，作文增分提档自在情理之中。 1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。 ①(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷·书面表达)If you are free this Sunday，you are expected to have a wonderful talk with us from 5 p．m.to 6 p．m.this Sunday. →If you are available this Sunday，you are expected to have a wonderful talk with us from 5 p．m.to 6 p．m.this Sunday. 1 ②(2021·天津卷·书面表达)I'm busy with my lessons now，for the College Entrance Examination，which is very important to me，is near. →I'm occupied with my lessons now，for the College Entrance Examination，which is of great importance to me，is around the corner. 1 2．更新换代，避免重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。 ①The team will hold many activities，some of which will appeal to you，including many matches. →The team will hold a range of activities，some of which will appeal to you，including quite a few matches. ②We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be. →We've constructed a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also set up a library where the old playground used to be. 1 3．单词短语，巧妙互用 一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。 ①Knowing that you like classical music，I'd like to invite you to join me and welcome you to show your performance. →Knowing that you are fond of classical music，I'd like to invite you to join me and welcome you to show your performance. ②(经典高考题)I've decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 a．m. on Wednesday，which will last two hours. →I've made up my mind to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 a．m. on Wednesday，which will last two hours. 1 4．高级替代，低级淘汰 为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中阶段学过的词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。 ①I hope my advice will be helpful to you.I'm sure you will have a great time. →I hope my advice will be beneficial to you.I'm sure you will have a gr