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专题二　读后续写 满分技法1　牢记续写“七•三•四原则”——让续写最契合原文 1 一、七个“不” 1．不增加人物 由考纲样题及近几年高考真题中所给的段落首句可知，续写的故事情节发展都是由原文的人物所推进，因此，强行增加人物有可能会偏离情节发展。 2．不增加旁支情节 题目要求“考生根据所给情节进行续写”，旨在延续原材料的故事情节，并不是要发展新情节。 1 3．不用过多对话 在续写中展示对话，虽能丰富内容和语言，增强语篇的连贯性，但使用过多的对话，会显得篇幅累赘且很难在限定的词数里把整个后续的情节发展补充完整。 4．不用负能量结局 结局设计绝对不能负能量。内容应该积极向上，能增长知识或传播正能量。 5．不在文末设置悬念 题目要求是“使之构成一篇完整的短文”，若在文末设置悬念，就会给人一种还没结束的感觉，这样的故事是不完整的。 1 6．不偏离原文主题 续写的情节应时刻围绕着短文的主题去推进。 7．不违背逻辑常理 情节和细节的想象要合理，符合生活常识及具有逻辑性。 1 二、三个原则 1．原文一致原则 续写内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，保持时态一致、人物一致、事件一致及语言表达风格一致。 2．曲折性原则 凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏或矛盾冲突，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。但情节设计不能过于复杂或离奇，否则阅卷老师便不能快速读懂你想表达的内容。 1 3．正能量原则 故事内容一定要传递正能量，围绕“真善美”的大主题去设计情节，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家； 失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了； 吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处； 犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人； 贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。 1 三、四大步骤 1 [典例] (2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the day of the big cross-country run.Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route (路线) through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David，who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence.He was small for ten years old.His usual big toothy smile was absent today.I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children.He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. 1 What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the school's coach and asked him what had happened.“I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him，” he explained uncomfortably.“I gave him the choice to run or not，and let him decide.” I bit back my frustration (懊恼)．I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing.After making sure that David could run if he wanted，I turned to find him coming towards me，his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward. 1 David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children，but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid.He always participat