UNIT 4 Section Ⅳ Writing-【高考领航】2023-2024学年高中英语必修第一册同步核心辅导与测评（外研版）

Section Ⅳ　Writing 读 后 续 写 [满分微讲坛——范式素材感悟·有章可循] 一、课文范式推荐 本单元的写作任务是写一则故事的结尾，属于读后续写的范畴。读后续写，就是先阅读所给阅读材料，然后再结合所给段落的开头语写出下文。其所提供的语言材料的体裁以记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主。文章题材多样，但多为情节丰富的小故事，趣味性和逻辑性较强。该写作任务具有一定的开放性，要求考生详细且生动地展现情景、态度和情感。本部分课文是欧·亨利的短篇小说《二十年后》中节选部分的结尾。这部分课文通过描写主人公的心理活动和对话，结局证实了故事开头出现的警察就是Jimmy。故事中的两个好朋友二十年前的约定最终实现了，但是Bob也被好朋友Jimmy送进了监狱。最后出现一个出乎意料的结局正是欧·亨利短篇小说的一个典型特点！ 二、话题素材积累 (1)心理活动 ①dance/jump for joy　　高兴地跳起来 ②in cheerful spirits 心情愉快 ③be delighted at 对……很高兴 ④brighten sb.'s heart 使某人心情愉快 ⑤a strong sense of loss 强烈的失落感 ⑥with a heavy heart 怀着沉重的心情 ⑦make one's heart bleed 使某人痛心 ⑧cry one's heart out 痛哭欲绝 (2)对话描写 ①say...loudly/proudly/gently/softly/abruptly/unexpectedly/angrily/bitterly/ seriously/firmly/cheerfully 大声地/自豪地/温柔地/柔和地/突然地/意想不到地/生气地/悲痛地/严肃地/坚定地/高兴地说…… ②explain sth. properly 适当地解释某事 ③talk about 谈论 ④mention sth.to sb. 向某人提及某事 ⑤announce that 宣布…… (3)外貌描写 ①with a pair of blue eyes on her round face　　　她圆圆的脸上有一双蓝色的眼睛 ②be of medium build 中等身材 ③have her hair tied in a ponytail 她梳着马尾辫 ④in rags 衣衫褴褛 ⑤a person of＋名词 ……样的人 (4)性格描写 ①an easy-going and warm-hearted/straightforward/humorous/sensitive/active/ gentle /shy /stubborn girl 一个随和又热心肠的/坦率的/幽默的/敏感的/活跃的/温柔的/害羞的/顽固的女孩 ②a person of great determination/will 一个坚决/拥有坚强意志的人 ③be strict/patient with 对……要求严格/有耐心 ④be responsible for　 对……负责 (5)环境描写 ①a rainy season 多雨的季节 ②a stormy night 暴风雨之夜 ③be exposed to the four winds of heaven 四面受风 ④continuous/constant rain 连绵不断的雨 ⑤in the blinding rain 在茫茫大雨中 ⑥be buried in snow 埋在雪中 ⑦unbearable hot 难以忍受的热 ⑧in the warm spring sunshine 在春天温暖的阳光里 [满分练到位——妙笔成篇训练·立竿见影] 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing boat. It was moving fast. “Hello！” they shouted. The men on the boat looked at them angrily. Max looked carefully at the boat. “Something's wrong with their fishing net，”he said. They got nearer to the net. “What's that？” said Tonya. “There is something in the net.