2024届高考英语读后续写材料整理讲义

读后续写整理材料 读后续写记叙文分为明线和暗线 明线为事件的发生而暗线则是人物的情感变化 情感的多种表达方式： 情感+seize/ take hold of/ flood/ sweep · Nervousness took hold of him. · Excitement seized me. · A wave of confidence flooded into his heart. · Courage deserted(抛弃) him. · Tears welled up in David’s eyes. · David’s face brightened. 结尾：关于提炼、总结立意的常用表达： 从我的视角，总结感悟 Only then did I realize it is...that+从句 At that moment, I realized that+从句 The experience will always remain in my memory, inspiring/reminding me that+从句 What I learned from this contest was the secret to creative thinking. 我从这次比赛中学到的是创造性思维的秘诀。 从第三人称视角，进行总结 Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a big difference. With tears welling up in his eyes, David proved that... During our life, there are always moments when we feel delighted. David told us... 多种类型的“说” 一般的说：say, ask, reply, respond 补充说、固执的说：add, insist 大声、小声说：announce, declare / whisper, murmur 自言自语的说：think to oneself, murmur to oneself 笑着说：smile, laugh 高声喊叫：cry, shout, scream, yell 哭着说：cry, weep, sob 在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。 1　 in a/an+形容词+tone “I would love to.” said Emily in a pleasant tone. “我很乐意。爱米丽用愉快的语气说。 2　 in a/an+形容词+voice “I don't know what you mean,” she murmured in a low voice.“我不明白你的意思，”她低声说。 3　 介词短语 in: in surprise惊讶/shock震惊/sorrow悲伤/horror恐惧/anger生气 with: with delight /excitement /embarrassment /pride /caution/care/patience/certainty 副词 firmly坚定地/excitedly激动地/seriously严肃地/sincerely真诚地/slowly慢慢地/regretfully后悔地 “I hate you !” she screamed in anger. “我恨你!”她愤怒地叫道。 “Is it true ?” he whispered with astonishment. “这是真的吗?”他惊讶地低声问。 “It isn’t fair !”he exclaimed angrily. “这不公平!”他愤怒地喊道。 作文例句 1. The adults burst into applause and I felt proud and thrilled. 大人们爆发出热烈的掌声，我感到骄傲和激动。 2. The judge stared at me, with narrowed eyes, shocked。主持人盯着我，眯起眼睛，惊呆了 3. He bit his lower lips, with his hand tightly clutching the dollar. 他咬着下唇，手紧紧攥着那美元。 4. Ronny's words constantly flashed through his mind.罗尼的话不断地在他脑海里闪过。 5. It hit him that he should do something nice