内容正文:
Unit 3 Our Hobbies
单元话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1.你们学校的英语俱乐部正在举行以“健康的爱好、快乐地生活”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据下面的提示,以My Hobby为题写一篇短文参加比赛。
过去
玩电脑游戏
耗时
有害健康
现在
做运动
强身健体
……(请补充)
听音乐
……(请补充)
要求:
1)必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥;
2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Hobby
Different people have different hobbies. Some hobbies are good for us while some are bad. It’s important for us to have good ones.
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【答案】例文:
My Hobby
Different people have different hobbies. Some hobbies are good for us while some are bad. It’s important for us to have good ones.
In the past, I was interested in playing computer games. It took me lots of time and it was bad for my health. Now I prefer doing exercise. Basketball is my favorite. It helps build me up and now I am much stronger than before. And I can make new friends when playing basketball with others. I also enjoy listening to music. It makes me relax. Sometimes I go to a concert with my parents or friends.
Good hobbies can help people a lot. I hope everyone has good hobbies and lives happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,写作时根据表格中的提示信息介绍自己过去和现在的爱好,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己过去的爱好;
第三步,介绍自己现在的爱好;
第四步,书写结语,总结好的爱好对人的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be bad for对……有害处
③enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①It helps build me up and now I am much stronger than before. (and连接的并列句)
②And I can make new friends when playing basketball with others. (when引导时间状语从句,从句中省略主语I和be动词am)
2.红星中学打算在下学期增设新的课后活动,学校对八年级200名学生开展了“My Hobby”的问卷调查,请你根据右图中的数据,写一篇报告,