读后续写情绪表达的方法讲义-2024届高三英语一轮复习写作专项

在高考英语读后续写中,情绪描写可以推动情节的发展,或者说情节发展到一定程度主人公会呈现出不同的情绪。情绪描写在展现人物性格,故事发展,价值引领等方面都有重要作用。大部分的读后续写除了在情节上遵循“conflict-solution”的原则之外,还有一条暗线,即人物是从“负向negative”情绪,最终转化到“正向positive”情绪,比如从anxious到calm;从sad到happy;从desperate到充hopeful,从worried到relieved等等。 描写情绪通常会有两种方法: 第一、直接描写,即句子中直接出现表示情绪的单词或者短语。比如:Nervous and anxious, he paced up and down in the room. 第二、间接描写,即通过表情和肢体动作或者环境烘托来体现人物的某种情绪。如:He stormed out of the room, slamming the door heavily behind him.此句就是采用动作描写来表现人物的“愤怒和生气”。 直接描写的方法和语料(跟句型搭配在一起如:分词做状语、倒装……) 1. 用情绪形容词做伴随状语。首先,以描写开心喜悦为例:我们要积累表示“开心,喜悦”的形容词。比如happy, delighted, cheerful, joyful, merry, thrilled, excited等例句:Delighted, he opened the box immediately and read the letter written by his father.开心不已,他立刻打开盒子,读了父亲写来的信。 2.用无灵主语,以表示情绪的名词作为主语。 ①a flush/flood/wave/ripple/wave/sense of +名词joy/happiness+sweep over/flood over/rush through/surge through +sb 表示“一股……之情涌上……”例句:The audience applauding wildly, she felt a sense of happiness surging through her body.观众疯狂鼓掌,她感到很开心。 ②情绪名词+seize/dominate/overcome/overwhelm/consume/swallow/take over/take hold of/get the better of/take control of + sb 被某种情绪支配例句:Seized by terror, she couldn’t move an inch at the sight of the frightening bear.看到可怕的熊,她被恐惧支配着,一动不敢动。 ③情绪名词+creep on sb 某种情绪爬上心头。A wave of panic crept on Marry when she walked through the trail alone in the darkness.当玛丽独自走在黑暗的小路上时,一阵恐慌向她袭来。 3.与so...that...倒装和as if/though联合使用例句:So furious was he that he felt as if her lungs were to explode. 她气得肺都要炸了。 间接描写方法及语料 网上曾经有一段很火的话:你要写风,你就不能只写风,要写树梢弯度,写湖面波纹,写树叶婆娑的声音。要写屋檐边悬挂的风铃响,写轻舟语竹筏轻轻漾,秋千轻轻晃。写不听话的衣角和发梢,写抓不住的气球,写握紧的伞柄,写拨云见日的山,写卷起又落下的浪,甚至是一场散了的雾。其实读后续写的情绪描写也是一样如果你要写快乐,你就不能只写快乐。你要写天真烂漫的笑容,写余音绕梁的笑声;要写清风拂面,冬日暖阳;写清澈的眼神,写一切你向往的美好和止不住的嘴角上扬。 方法一、神态表情、肢体动作(仅举几例)表示开心:his face lit up, smile from ear to ear; eyes sparkled/twinkled/glowed/shone with joy; jump up and down; throw arms to the air...表示伤心:tears stream down the face, bury one’s face in hands; sob bitterly...表示生气:stamp one’s feet; glare at sb; bite one’s lips; clench one’s fist; face flush red; shout a