读后续写微技能 To show , not to tell 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习写作专项

To show，not to tell A technique in continuation writing 读后续写微技能 By Wei Ying 1 Show the readers everything, tell them nothing. --Ernest Hemingway Don’t tell me the moon is shining. Show me the glint (闪光） of light on broken glass. --Anton Chechove Version 1: One woman fell down, got up, and then walked away sadly. Version 2: After a while, a group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head. One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. --B3U2 The Stone on the Road Read and Compare Tell Show To Tell: give us information To Show: help us form pictures in our mind through details. How？ What is “to show” ? After a while, a group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head. One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the group. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. --B3U2 The Stone on the Road How to show (1) ... So early one cold winter morning, she set out to a distant town. After four hours of struggling through snow, she found the town and quikly bundled （捆扎）her new samovar into her sack and hurried home... --B2U4 Samovar-the Special Teaport Strategy 1: Use specific action verbs 读后续写 To tell : I missed the school bus. To show： I ______ down the road, wildly _______ my hands, and ______, “Stop, stop!”, but the bus travelled on without stopping. With m