读后续写竞赛故事类 比赛重要的是过程，而非结果 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 竞赛故事——比赛重要的是过程，而非结果 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 In old times, there was a story about a young athletic boy hungry for success, for whom winning was everything. One day, the boy was preparing himself for a running competition in his small native village. He and two other young boys were to compete. A large crowd had gathered to witness the competition and a wise old man, upon hearing of the little boy, had traveled far to see it too. The race started. The boy showed his determination, strength and power and he was first. The crowd cheered and waved at the boy. The wise man remained still and calm. The little boy, however, felt proud and important. 4 4 续写原文 A second race was called, and two new young challengers came forward to run with the little boy. The little boy finished first once again. The crowd again cheered and waved at the boy. The wise man expressed no opinion. The little boy, however, felt proud and important. “Another race, another race!” shouted the little boy. The wise old man stepped forward and presented the little boy with two new challengers, a frail old lady and a blind man. “What is this?” asked the little boy. “Race!” said the wise man. The race was started and the boy was the only finisher. The little boy raised his arms in delight. The crowd, however, was silent showing no happiness. “What has happened? Why don’t they join in my success?” he asked the wise old man. “Race again, ” replied the wise man. “This time, all three of you, finish together,” continued the wise man. 5 5 段首句 Para 1：The little boy thought a little. Para 2：“Old man, I don’t understand! Who are the crowd cheering for? Which one of us?” asked the little boy. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 8 8 续写思路分析 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个年轻的渴望成功的运动员视胜利为一切，在赢了两场比赛后，智者给男孩带来了两个特殊的挑战者。男孩胜之不武，村民们也没像前两次一样为他欢呼。智者要求他第四场比赛时要与这两个特殊的挑战者一起到达终点。当男孩拉着这两位特殊挑战