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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
竞赛故事——辩论赛场,友谊第一比赛第二
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题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
I had always prided myself on my sharp tongue and brilliant response whether in class debates or casual arguments. Thus, when I was selected to represent the school in the national debate series, I was naturally extremely confident of myself.
All the members in my team were good speakers. We had an experienced teacher who trained us well. But I was undoubtedly the most outstanding speaker. In each of the rounds that I debated in, all the judges selected me as the best one. This meant that my confidence was the highest by the time we found ourselves with one week to train before the finals. I had every reason to believe that I would be voted the best speaker for the debate series.
I began to be self-important about the whole business and started behaving that way with my team-mates. I would laugh at Eton’s poor debating style. I would complain of Vivian’s slow response. I saw myself as the natural debater who would be disappointed by their bad performance.
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As the finals drew near, I became more and more dissatisfied with my team. I began missing practices. My teacher was worried. My teammates were panicked. However, they had no choice but to rely on me to win the finals. Even if they would love to remove me from the team they could not because there was no replacement good enough.
The day of the finals finally came. I was very excited that I was able to finally show off my debating skills. Everyone was expecting my performance.They knew that I was praised to be the one most likely to win the best speaker for the debate series.
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段首句
Para 1:But the reality was not something that I had ever imagined.
Para 2:Suddenly,a comforting hand from behind held mine.
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Part 2
题目分析
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点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;
点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;
点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;
点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写思路分析
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者为自己辩论方面的才能感到自豪,在准备参加全国辩论系列节目时,作者的信心达到了空前的高